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Crushing my soul like autumn leaves
Capturing me on the border of illusion and reality
I carefully tread the thin line between sanity and lunacy
The latter turning my moods wine dark
And tearing apart all reasoning
Insomnia has taken ahold
Forcing me to sleep in cobweb strands
and praying for some sort of redemption
Until I have no choice but to let go
and finally fade to black [comments] => 7 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bohemian_with_a_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Wine Dark Moods

Contributed by bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:21:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

This depression is smothering me
Crushing my soul like autumn leaves
Capturing me on the border of illusion and reality
I carefully tread the thin line between sanity and lunacy
The latter turning my moods wine dark
And tearing apart all reasoning
Insomnia has taken ahold
Forcing me to sleep in cobweb strands
and praying for some sort of redemption
Until I have no choice but to let go
and finally fade to black

Copyright © bohemian_with_a_pen ... [ 2004-12-05 02:21:17]
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Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by in2thetwilightzone2 on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:28:38 AM AEST
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oooh, dark, powerfull, remnded me of a black cloud cascading down on to earth with the mighty force of hell,
destroying everything, even destroying us...

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:58:37 AM AEST
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Know what that's like.
I discovered writing in 1979. Had to empty my over active brain somehow.
Once my brain is satisfied then I sleep.Sometimess it's hours then other times days/
Awesome masterpeice 2 us the other insomniacs.
lub, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:31:54 AM AEST
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This is awesome, i love the feeling of this. Such a dark write and written so well.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:32:03 AM AEST
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very good, structured well, very sad and emotional, and depressive,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:42:18 PM AEST
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Forcing me to sleep in cobweb strands
and praying for some sort of redemption

I thought this was strong and heavy - wonderful job depicting the smothering so well.

Thanks for sharing

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 10:21:05 AM AEST
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Woah, I love this.
Powerful and dark.
Great write, you used great descriptions.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Wine Dark Moods (User Rating: 1 )
by _myonlyone_ on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 12:31:19 AM AEST
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wow... that's all I can really say. Amazing descriptions. keep up the great work...

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