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Array ( [sid] => 74461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What is your love? [time] => 2004-12-05 01:55:42 [hometext] => This is all about a man losing his love who takes her stride with another person and leaving him only to sob [bodytext] => Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
Should the person take the way one`s mind takes?
Should we forget the path noble persons took?

The power of your eye-sight went along with the dreams
The words you had spoken went along with the breeze
But the truth of our love, the city knows, will live for you
And to those who don`t understand, it will slew
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?

For false-hood people like you, it’s a new culture
Some follow this culture, since they don`t beware
For those living earnestly, which is the culture?
They follow the culture, laid out by our ancestors
Should we forget the path noble persons took?

What is the use of those minds that don`t amend?
Why should they be born, if they don`t get concerned?
Whether you be alive or die, your name be spelled
Who else can live this way, your name be proclaimed
Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 22 [informant] => girish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
What is your love?

Contributed by girish on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:55:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
Should the person take the way one`s mind takes?
Should we forget the path noble persons took?

The power of your eye-sight went along with the dreams
The words you had spoken went along with the breeze
But the truth of our love, the city knows, will live for you
And to those who don`t understand, it will slew
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?

For false-hood people like you, it’s a new culture
Some follow this culture, since they don`t beware
For those living earnestly, which is the culture?
They follow the culture, laid out by our ancestors
Should we forget the path noble persons took?

What is the use of those minds that don`t amend?
Why should they be born, if they don`t get concerned?
Whether you be alive or die, your name be spelled
Who else can live this way, your name be proclaimed
Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?




Copyright © girish ... [ 2004-12-05 01:55:42]
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Re: What is your love? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:02:04 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: What is your love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:10:22 AM AEST
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great write...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes


Re: What is your love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:17:59 AM AEST
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I have seen love walk away
I have felt the terrible pain
I can really relate to this poem
Forgive me lord for I am human I am weak
The mind says no
I follow my feet
Nice poem great meaning

Sinned


Re: What is your love? (User Rating: 1 )
by sek-c-shaun on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:05:21 PM AEST
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great poem......it really makes you think


Re: What is your love? (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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great write.. coinsumes you in thought... thank you for your comments on my writting




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