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Array ( [sid] => 74456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change, the most beautiful [time] => 2004-12-05 00:51:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Change, the most beautiful,
My saving grace,
I found you in a future,
10,000 miles from this place

that drove me to madness, sadness,
derangement,
A scrap of great yearning, then
bitter estrangement,
And not to say the
Journey was lost;
A futile gesture, surely not!
I found a few of my selves
On the way, and had to find one
That I’d be someday,

Ineffable ends
find sighs and grins
to greet them in their coming,
and mine is no different
suffice it to say,
I bid my leave to the old world today

Change, the most beautiful,
Your Winds, may I borrow,
To bestow on myself the great gift of Tomorrow? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 572 [topic] => 21 [informant] => TheSchroedmeister [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Change, the most beautiful

Contributed by TheSchroedmeister on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:51:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Change, the most beautiful,
My saving grace,
I found you in a future,
10,000 miles from this place

that drove me to madness, sadness,
derangement,
A scrap of great yearning, then
bitter estrangement,
And not to say the
Journey was lost;
A futile gesture, surely not!
I found a few of my selves
On the way, and had to find one
That I’d be someday,

Ineffable ends
find sighs and grins
to greet them in their coming,
and mine is no different
suffice it to say,
I bid my leave to the old world today

Change, the most beautiful,
Your Winds, may I borrow,
To bestow on myself the great gift of Tomorrow?

Copyright Â© TheSchroedmeister ... [ 2004-12-05 00:51:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by in2thetwilightzone2 on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:20:40 AM AEST
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aw, its sad isnt it? but yes tommorow is always there. good write

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:52:40 AM AEST
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I missed this, and your recent submissions. I'm glad I found it now...

You are improving, I can tell.
This was more than excellent, Schroed.

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:18:42 AM AEST
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So many people get stuck in the heart break and don't see the growth. Others, like me, see it, but can seldom put it into words. Then there are those such as yourself who can do both and do it with eloquence.
Stitch

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by neveryours on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:53:50 PM AEST
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I found a few of my selves
On the way, and had to find one
That I’d be someday,

I liked this - thanks to Neptunes for pointing it out in the forum.

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:04:09 AM AEST
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So very true... a 'journey' is never a wasted venture. I particularly like the opening stanza here... it is very nearly enough on its own.

Nicely done!

Glad to see you posting again!
~SNM~

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by purecitrus on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:35:32 PM AEST
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You commented on my poem so I looked up some of yours - this is wonderful!! Thanks for your input...

Katie

Re: Change, the most beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:11:24 PM AEST
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Oh, I just breathed this one in. This is one where I can say that I have been there, and I'm so glad I was. Never felt or read it expressed like this before though. More good stuff, and thank you for sharing it.
Stitch

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