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Array ( [sid] => 74441 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the truth is killing me [time] => 2004-12-04 22:27:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you tore a hole
into helpless hearts
i tried to understand
but i cant set apart
all that you have done
though i have tried
to look at you
through forgiving eyes
she makes it so hard
i keep trying to believe
its not your fault
but you lied to me
through it all
you justified your lies
with such grace
that not a single tear
ran down my face
it didnt make sense
but you went on
about a life
where i dont belong
i hope you are as happy
as i try to portray
the most synthetic of smiles
every wednesday. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

the truth is killing me

Contributed by Chanti on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

you tore a hole
into helpless hearts
i tried to understand
but i cant set apart
all that you have done
though i have tried
to look at you
through forgiving eyes
she makes it so hard
i keep trying to believe
its not your fault
but you lied to me
through it all
you justified your lies
with such grace
that not a single tear
ran down my face
it didnt make sense
but you went on
about a life
where i dont belong
i hope you are as happy
as i try to portray
the most synthetic of smiles
every wednesday.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2004-12-04 22:27:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the truth is killing me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:32:36 PM AEST
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excellent write. written well and full of power.

Re: the truth is killing me (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Very good poem. The lines...

"though i have tried
to look at you
through forgiving eyes
she makes it so hard"

...reached me well.

Re: the truth is killing me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:37:27 PM AEST
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Cool poem awesome and visual, showing strength, and written in emotion and feeling, beaitufl poem...keep on writing

Re: the truth is killing me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM AEST
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good poem indeed I enjoyed it. I don't know
who your talking about... maybe a counselor?
But I suggest you don't meet this person
again on Wednesday. Once again a great
poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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