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Array ( [sid] => 74383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => step into my shoes [time] => 2004-12-04 11:24:23 [hometext] => noone will eva understand [bodytext] => step into my shoes
and feel wat i'm feelin
hurt like i am hurting
feel the pain that is burning
me, all up inside
and tell me how it makes u feel and why?

step into my shoes
can you handle all at once
can u see the outside story?
can u fight a battle and end wiht the glory
can u look me in the eye and say ur not weak
can u really tell me life isn't looking too mean?

step into my shoes
breath the air that i am breathing
seek for help where no one is seeking
look at the world with a new meaning
tell me that ur colour isn't black and dark
dat ur heart is without wounds or any marks

step into my shoes
into a small glass box
and tell me u don't feel like ur trap
tell me u feel like a traveler without a map
no high way no road no right way to follow
ur stuck inside with ur heart empty and hollow
freezon hard cold like a stone
no one inside of you, your feelin alone
suffocating, to difficult 2 hard to breath
weakend by pain, down on ur knees

step into my shoes
and feel the pain in ur chest
ur world upside down and ur mind is a mess
make urself at home i'm inviting u in
let me warn u there will be a feelin of dim

step into my shoes
get ready for the ride
cause when ur not prepared
off your feet they might fly.
naked bare for everyone to see
you'll feel the pain
you'll know wut i mean [comments] => 4 [counter] => 452 [topic] => 21 [informant] => bluebird [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
step into my shoes

Contributed by bluebird on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:24:23 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



step into my shoes
and feel wat i'm feelin
hurt like i am hurting
feel the pain that is burning
me, all up inside
and tell me how it makes u feel and why?

step into my shoes
can you handle all at once
can u see the outside story?
can u fight a battle and end wiht the glory
can u look me in the eye and say ur not weak
can u really tell me life isn't looking too mean?

step into my shoes
breath the air that i am breathing
seek for help where no one is seeking
look at the world with a new meaning
tell me that ur colour isn't black and dark
dat ur heart is without wounds or any marks

step into my shoes
into a small glass box
and tell me u don't feel like ur trap
tell me u feel like a traveler without a map
no high way no road no right way to follow
ur stuck inside with ur heart empty and hollow
freezon hard cold like a stone
no one inside of you, your feelin alone
suffocating, to difficult 2 hard to breath
weakend by pain, down on ur knees

step into my shoes
and feel the pain in ur chest
ur world upside down and ur mind is a mess
make urself at home i'm inviting u in
let me warn u there will be a feelin of dim

step into my shoes
get ready for the ride
cause when ur not prepared
off your feet they might fly.
naked bare for everyone to see
you'll feel the pain
you'll know wut i mean




Copyright © bluebird ... [ 2004-12-04 11:24:23]
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Re: step into my shoes (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:29:27 AM AEST
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interesting emotion isnt it?


Re: step into my shoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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i dont know why you're having these feelings,but in my life i have similar feelings for my reasons.i really like this.GREATLY SAID.Hope things get better for you


Re: step into my shoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:00:07 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem Blubird.
I know i cant step into your shoes as you cant step into mine. But i do know about pain and horror in this world of ours.
I hope you stay strong and dont let them win.
Take care!!!!

EVE


Re: step into my shoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:04:20 AM AEST
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Of course no one will...that is life...we are all to full of our own separate selves to ever understand anyone else...so sto ptrying...every which way it is a foregone conclusion...accept that fact and let everything lie..no one will understand you as you will never understand me...oh well...very provocative write by the way...just my meanderings and mentations.




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