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Array ( [sid] => 74319 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You Too [time] => 2004-12-03 19:42:35 [hometext] => this poem is basically about a girl that was so much in love with her boyfriend when he broke her heart she couldnt go on any longer and she ended up taking her own life. [bodytext] => What is this pain…
That melts me inside
Takes all that I have
Makes me want to die
I’m right at the edge
I’m standing on the slippery ledge
They try and tell me I’m sane
But I’m slipping from the striking rain
I can see the ground now
Oh no! I’ve tripped
Do I want to let go do I want to loose grip?
I love you I scream I just thought you should know
He stops with fear his expression is lost
What has she done!
He turns to the police man, shivers run down his spine
I took her life he says… and now I’ll take mine
As he walks to the ledge tears roll down his cheeks
His heart begins racing his body feels so weak
They try and stop him, but there’s nothing they can do
He dives of the ledge and screams I love you too.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 39 [informant] => hugs_and_kisses_cutie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

I Love You Too

Contributed by hugs_and_kisses_cutie on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

What is this pain…
That melts me inside
Takes all that I have
Makes me want to die
I’m right at the edge
I’m standing on the slippery ledge
They try and tell me I’m sane
But I’m slipping from the striking rain
I can see the ground now
Oh no! I’ve tripped
Do I want to let go do I want to loose grip?
I love you I scream I just thought you should know
He stops with fear his expression is lost
What has she done!
He turns to the police man, shivers run down his spine
I took her life he says… and now I’ll take mine
As he walks to the ledge tears roll down his cheeks
His heart begins racing his body feels so weak
They try and stop him, but there’s nothing they can do
He dives of the ledge and screams I love you too.

Copyright Â© hugs_and_kisses_cutie ... [ 2004-12-03 19:42:35]
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Re: I Love You Too (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:35:51 PM AEST
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another great concept....I love it when I hear something new....I hope to see some more in the future

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