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Array ( [sid] => 74316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The sorrow that struck her [time] => 2004-12-03 19:33:33 [hometext] => A woman describes her sorrow, when her husband leaves her and her child And nobody is there to speak for her [bodytext] => If life becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer
If my hand beats me, if my fingers poke my eyes
Having shed no tears, if my eyes should flow as a river
And for me, there is not even one person who cares

For this poor, judgement has eyes but has no vision
People are there who can witness cow as snake
But can they suck from cow`s belly, snake`s poison
What sin did I commit?, the sweat on my body will ask
If this becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer

Where does the rain drops, falling on earth goes?
Which mind, do the relations we make really reach?
Atop from mountains, the Ganges, into the sea it flows
Follows the rule, that nature has given it as preach

Divine rule spells the formula of this man for this woman
But when my man changed the formula, arose the dispute
Change or relation and urge of possession, resolves when
If relation becomes a puzzle, who will provide the suite

When my hearts are your throne, do not go away
If you can look after me, no problems can arise
Having been your queen, eyes flow with tears today
When I wanted to sing all about your praise
If your presence becomes a puzzle, where is the answer





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The sorrow that struck her

Contributed by girish on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:33:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



If life becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer
If my hand beats me, if my fingers poke my eyes
Having shed no tears, if my eyes should flow as a river
And for me, there is not even one person who cares

For this poor, judgement has eyes but has no vision
People are there who can witness cow as snake
But can they suck from cow`s belly, snake`s poison
What sin did I commit?, the sweat on my body will ask
If this becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer

Where does the rain drops, falling on earth goes?
Which mind, do the relations we make really reach?
Atop from mountains, the Ganges, into the sea it flows
Follows the rule, that nature has given it as preach

Divine rule spells the formula of this man for this woman
But when my man changed the formula, arose the dispute
Change or relation and urge of possession, resolves when
If relation becomes a puzzle, who will provide the suite

When my hearts are your throne, do not go away
If you can look after me, no problems can arise
Having been your queen, eyes flow with tears today
When I wanted to sing all about your praise
If your presence becomes a puzzle, where is the answer









Copyright © girish ... [ 2004-12-03 19:33:33]
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Re: The sorrow that struck her (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:34:36 PM AEST
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mine is really about love from a far not a love fallen apart i dont like mine and yours is hard to dicifer


Re: The sorrow that struck her (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:11:27 AM AEST
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Awesome writing as always.
huggs, smiles,
emy




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