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Array ( [sid] => 74314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2004-12-03 19:23:58 [hometext] => i dont think its as corny as its title....(well its my first love poem...dont think im very good about writing of love..so i`d appreciate the feedback!) [bodytext] => The first guy I held hands with
Who whispered softly in my ear
The first guy who I fell hard for
And it ended up in tears.
The first one to ask if he could kiss me,
The first to tell me that I’m cute,
The first guy to make me feel special
The first to leave me flushed and mute.
The firs guy to be so gentle
To treat me as if I’d break,
The first guy that left me,
In just one lousy day.
The first guy I couldn’t get my mind off,
The one who gave me butterflies,
The first guy to hold me
So that it left me warm inside.
The first guy I fell hard for,
Was the one who broke my heart,
It didn’t hurt that bad,
We barely got to start.
And one day, just like that all the feelings left,
It seems as if they died,
For the first guy to break my heart,
The first guy to whom I say goodbye…

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 24 [informant] => xxbreathlessx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Goodbye

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The first guy I held hands with
Who whispered softly in my ear
The first guy who I fell hard for
And it ended up in tears.
The first one to ask if he could kiss me,
The first to tell me that I’m cute,
The first guy to make me feel special
The first to leave me flushed and mute.
The firs guy to be so gentle
To treat me as if I’d break,
The first guy that left me,
In just one lousy day.
The first guy I couldn’t get my mind off,
The one who gave me butterflies,
The first guy to hold me
So that it left me warm inside.
The first guy I fell hard for,
Was the one who broke my heart,
It didn’t hurt that bad,
We barely got to start.
And one day, just like that all the feelings left,
It seems as if they died,
For the first guy to break my heart,
The first guy to whom I say goodbye…

Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-12-03 19:23:58]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:31:44 PM AEST
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In my opinion it was a great poem... and i liked it... great write...

hope to c more from u soon

~!*!~Jishes~!*!~

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:56:30 PM AEST
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i liked this,it reminds me of my first love

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:35:22 PM AEST
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I enjoyed it...very good, thanks

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:10:07 PM AEST
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I love this! Awesome write! I can relate to it. :-)

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 05:40:30 PM AEST
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I experienced a similar feeling to my first girlfriend. She broke my heart, but like you said, one day the feelings left, and I had no trouble in saying goodbye because I knew that I would just get hurt again. This reminds me of some song lyrics. I don't know if you've heard of the band "Death Cab for Cutie" (I know it's a strange name) They're indie rock and are one of my favorite bands.

"And there's no shame
that our love did slowly fade,
and now that it's gone,
it's like it wasn't there at all,
and here I rest,
while disappointment and regret,
collide,
lying awake at night"

It's a great breakup song.

Be True,
zenmind

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:24:01 PM AEST
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Very good- heart felt.. I enjoyed the poem but not your pain.. oh our first love do we ever forget their name?

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