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Array ( [sid] => 74313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Will Pay [time] => 2004-12-03 19:17:32 [hometext] => Dedicated to all who've ever hurt me in the past [bodytext] => It’s all your fault
I thought you’d know
That the emotions I feel
I’ll never show
You didn’t understand
And for this you’ll pay
With you’re life that
I will steal today
With this gun
Or with this knife
Which shall I use
To take your life
First I’ll start off
Nice and slow
The pain I felt
You soon will know
With this blade
I’ll slit you’re flesh
And let it bleed
Till nothings left
Then when you’re veins
Have drained away
In a desolate desert
I’ll leave you to lay
You’re flesh exposed
For a vultures meal
Have you yet come to realize
How it is I feel?
No not yet, then continue
I shall
Down a steep ravine
I’ll let you fall
repeatedly I will till
You’ve broke every bone
I’ll crush your lungs
With heavy stones
And then once you no
Longer breathe
This is my cue to
Briefly leave
And allow you to think
Why this came to be
To make you realize
What you’ve done to me
Or must I continue this
Agonizing pain
Until there’s none
Left to gain
At last you disfigured body
Will be set aflame
Why couldn’t you admit
You were to blame [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 6 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
You Will Pay

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:17:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



It’s all your fault
I thought you’d know
That the emotions I feel
I’ll never show
You didn’t understand
And for this you’ll pay
With you’re life that
I will steal today
With this gun
Or with this knife
Which shall I use
To take your life
First I’ll start off
Nice and slow
The pain I felt
You soon will know
With this blade
I’ll slit you’re flesh
And let it bleed
Till nothings left
Then when you’re veins
Have drained away
In a desolate desert
I’ll leave you to lay
You’re flesh exposed
For a vultures meal
Have you yet come to realize
How it is I feel?
No not yet, then continue
I shall
Down a steep ravine
I’ll let you fall
repeatedly I will till
You’ve broke every bone
I’ll crush your lungs
With heavy stones
And then once you no
Longer breathe
This is my cue to
Briefly leave
And allow you to think
Why this came to be
To make you realize
What you’ve done to me
Or must I continue this
Agonizing pain
Until there’s none
Left to gain
At last you disfigured body
Will be set aflame
Why couldn’t you admit
You were to blame




Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-12-03 19:17:32]
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Re: You Will Pay (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:23:53 PM AEST
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wow... gruesome... enjoyable read though... great write...

hope to c more from u soon

~!*!~Jishes~!*!~


Re: You Will Pay (User Rating: 1 )
by Cindy359 on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 06:22:45 AM AEST
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When somebody hurts us in the manner that destroys us inside and out. Revenge is not always the answer but I do feel for your hurt and anger. I hope you move on with your life.. This poem is well written it does show what I said..take care




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