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Array ( [sid] => 74309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would You Give Me Something New To Write?.... [time] => 2004-12-03 18:57:11 [hometext] => I wrote this on my graveyard shift lastnight.......tell me what you think [bodytext] => This morning I found the words
and all the things I would say
but i crumpled them into a ball
and threw them all away

They read: 'The summer left you behind
but that summer saw things
....a perfect silhouette
hidden behind blue wings.'

Why do I have to tell these tales of loss
with a hope ever so slight?
my pen is running out of ink
Would you give me something new to write? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => justjonesy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....

Contributed by justjonesy on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 06:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This morning I found the words
and all the things I would say
but i crumpled them into a ball
and threw them all away

They read: 'The summer left you behind
but that summer saw things
....a perfect silhouette
hidden behind blue wings.'

Why do I have to tell these tales of loss
with a hope ever so slight?
my pen is running out of ink
Would you give me something new to write?

Copyright © justjonesy ... [ 2004-12-03 18:57:11]
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Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:42:01 PM AEST
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Honestly...I read it and i didn't get what you were saying

Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?.... (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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well I was trying to write about how I am tired about writing of lost love and all the hope for the future stuff. It's supposed to be asking someone to be that person who will get me to write about something else ie. maybe love found...I dunno...it was about 5 am when I wrote it...they all can't be good i guess hey.....oh well

Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:40:25 AM AEST
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good rhyme pattern well done.

johnny.

Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:02:47 AM AEST
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Clever write. I liked it! :-)

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