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Array ( [sid] => 74280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stalker [time] => 2004-12-03 14:46:51 [hometext] => you'll either get it or you won't all comments welcome [bodytext] => sighs of regret
she would have been perfect
but shes just like the rest
she doesnt' love him
she doesn't want him
she doesn't know he exsists
but oh he knows about her
he knows her daily routine
an early riser
he likes that
a quick run in the park
home for a quick shower
and off with her day
he knows what she drives
the jaguar
an elegant choice
he watches her
desperate for her to live up
to his expectations
again he sighs
he really wanted this one
but she is just like the rest
caught up in herself
she wouldn't even give him a chance
he waits for her now
to return
she sees her sister on Wednesdays
she'll be home soon
and then as was meant to be
he must teach her the leason
that he has given to so many others
he hears the jaguar pull in to the drive
hmm...eleven thirty as always
right on time
he peaks out her attic window
and as he waits
blade in hand
he sighs [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ladyjaylee20 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Stalker

Contributed by ladyjaylee20 on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:46:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

sighs of regret
she would have been perfect
but shes just like the rest
she doesnt' love him
she doesn't want him
she doesn't know he exsists
but oh he knows about her
he knows her daily routine
an early riser
he likes that
a quick run in the park
home for a quick shower
and off with her day
he knows what she drives
the jaguar
an elegant choice
he watches her
desperate for her to live up
to his expectations
again he sighs
he really wanted this one
but she is just like the rest
caught up in herself
she wouldn't even give him a chance
he waits for her now
to return
she sees her sister on Wednesdays
she'll be home soon
and then as was meant to be
he must teach her the leason
that he has given to so many others
he hears the jaguar pull in to the drive
hmm...eleven thirty as always
right on time
he peaks out her attic window
and as he waits
blade in hand
he sighs

Copyright © ladyjaylee20 ... [ 2004-12-03 14:46:51]
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Re: Stalker (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:03:09 PM AEST
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this is scary. great story!

Re: Stalker (User Rating: 1 )
by Pepper on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:16:51 PM AEST
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Wow, that gave me chills.Great poem.

Re: Stalker (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:20:34 PM AEST
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maybe your meaning is diffrent from mine, but i loved this in many ways. good job my dear

Re: Stalker (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:25:36 PM AEST
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Nicely written the thoughts of a stalker and what he has and will do. I liked it.

~DENNIS~

Re: Stalker (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:40:44 PM AEST
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wow.. creepy.. well done!!!

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