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Array ( [sid] => 74267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dissected By Love [time] => 2004-12-03 12:17:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night air molests my skin My breath enhanced by all that’s within You know I’m not running anymore My eyes are blue again, the darkness floored Maybe you were just a phase Maybe I shouldn’t have believed you When you said ‘I’ll never change’ Now the black light pulls like a curtain My head is like Sarajevo My thoughts even less certain It all makes me suffer vertigo I’ve missed the not knowing what’s to come Sterile life had become dissected by love I wish I had some power in this charade But my only strength is to know never to let us fade Maybe this is a nice ending to the story [comments] => 6 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Overstated [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry ) Dissected By Love Contributed by Overstated on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:17:21 PM in AEST Topic: goodbyepoetry The night air molests my skin My breath enhanced by all that’s within You know I’m not running anymore My eyes are blue again, the darkness floored Maybe you were just a phase Maybe I shouldn’t have believed you When you said ‘I’ll never change’ Now the black light pulls like a curtain My head is like Sarajevo My thoughts even less certain It all makes me suffer vertigo I’ve missed the not knowing what’s to come Sterile life had become dissected by love I wish I had some power in this charade But my only strength is to know never to let us fade Maybe this is a nice ending to the story Copyright Â© Overstated ... [ 2004-12-03 12:17:21] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:59:00 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) nice and to the point. great work as always Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by arden on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:03:52 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) deep and meaningful. well written. it was an interesting write. made me think. nicely done. enjoyed it. Arden Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by in2thetwilightzone2 on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:15:25 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) oh darkness beneath the moon. brilliant Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by Renstar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:42:56 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) great write i really liked this good work:) Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:23:25 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Keep strong,I have faith in you,you'll get through this,beautifully done PumpkinPie Re: Dissected By Love (User Rating: 1 ) by NightOwl on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:57:39 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I loved the rhyme scheme and the comparisons... Now the black light pulls like a curtain My head is like Sarajevo My thoughts even less certain It all makes me suffer vertigo Absolutely brilliant!! *~Erin~*

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