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Array ( [sid] => 74257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. [time] => 2004-12-03 10:44:27 [hometext] => THANKS TO THE ONES WHO LIFTED ME UP IN MY WRITINGS. TO THE REST.. I DON'T CARE ANYMORE. AND THAT IS SAD. [bodytext] => Ok fine, Is that how you want it,
Just say what you want
and don't care how I want it,
How can you say it
Why always me
Why do you always pick on me
You write what you want,
You say what is on your heart
I am not allowed I see
This place you want me to part
You say no that isn't it
hey sandy no way
Then tell me my friend
why do you act this way
You put me down all the time
You say why do I always come around
You say no one wants to hear what you say
Get tired of hearing about God everyday.
You say I start arguements
You say your mad
You say I make people sad
well fine be that way
don't have to worry bout me
Im going away.
But I hope the lord puts everything on your mind
everytime you write a line
everytime you read a poem
if it is about god
then you think of me
that I only wanted to let you know he loves you
and he said it through me.
No more forums
no more poems
no more ugliness
no more noise
no more sandy
now you can have a great day
because right now at this moment
I AM WALKING AWAY.

I wont be back this time,
heck how many times have I said
only to come back anyways
and know what has been said.

I am not you,
I am only me
I am the one that says God can set you free,
You dont have to hurt
You dont have to cry
You dont have to get mad at me all of the time
not anymore ..
not after today.
cause my so called friends
I am walking away.

My head up high,
My eyes that see
Looking at GOD
and he is looking at me,

Lord I am sorry
I tried my best
I wrote your poetry
I even stood the test
I have to move on
I can't stay anymore.

They are all in your hands.

Thanks for the ones that stood by me,
making me feel loved and very happy,
thanks for all of them
you know who they to be
God I asked you to bless them
And take care of them for eternity.

I'M OUT, [comments] => 6 [counter] => 583 [topic] => 69 [informant] => sandy_poetrygodslove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => poets )
OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY.

Contributed by sandy_poetrygodslove on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic: poets



Ok fine, Is that how you want it,
Just say what you want
and don't care how I want it,
How can you say it
Why always me
Why do you always pick on me
You write what you want,
You say what is on your heart
I am not allowed I see
This place you want me to part
You say no that isn't it
hey sandy no way
Then tell me my friend
why do you act this way
You put me down all the time
You say why do I always come around
You say no one wants to hear what you say
Get tired of hearing about God everyday.
You say I start arguements
You say your mad
You say I make people sad
well fine be that way
don't have to worry bout me
Im going away.
But I hope the lord puts everything on your mind
everytime you write a line
everytime you read a poem
if it is about god
then you think of me
that I only wanted to let you know he loves you
and he said it through me.
No more forums
no more poems
no more ugliness
no more noise
no more sandy
now you can have a great day
because right now at this moment
I AM WALKING AWAY.

I wont be back this time,
heck how many times have I said
only to come back anyways
and know what has been said.

I am not you,
I am only me
I am the one that says God can set you free,
You dont have to hurt
You dont have to cry
You dont have to get mad at me all of the time
not anymore ..
not after today.
cause my so called friends
I am walking away.

My head up high,
My eyes that see
Looking at GOD
and he is looking at me,

Lord I am sorry
I tried my best
I wrote your poetry
I even stood the test
I have to move on
I can't stay anymore.

They are all in your hands.

Thanks for the ones that stood by me,
making me feel loved and very happy,
thanks for all of them
you know who they to be
God I asked you to bless them
And take care of them for eternity.

I'M OUT,




Copyright © sandy_poetrygodslove ... [ 2004-12-03 10:44:27]
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Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:57:45 AM AEST
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you go girl! keep up the GOOD work. don't stop


Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:15:35 AM AEST
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you are writing about what you believe in, and inspiration is just as good as a poets pen/keyboard. keep yer chin up, there are people who love your writing, dont let them get to you. i think your great.
in2thetwilightzone
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Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:03:11 PM AEST
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How pitifully sad


Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:54:50 AM AEST
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A sad, but very profoundd. I think one of the factors that makes your poetry so heartfelt and meaningful is the fact you serve God by using the talent he has bestowed upon you!

Great write, keep on writing
Willofree


Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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Sandy...
Leaving may not be the answer. PM me and we can talk through this.
Em


Re: OK FINE, IM WALKING AWAY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 08:11:07 AM AEST
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The day you walk away
You let them have their way
Won't you stay
You have much to say
God bless you each and every day
We hate to see you stray
Come back we will pray

Sinned




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