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Array ( [sid] => 74198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hope You See [time] => 2004-12-02 21:53:47 [hometext] => dedicated to my best friend and first love [bodytext] => I hope you see,
Just what you have done for my life,
You gave to me much more than I ever thought I would have; You set my heart free,
You took away all my pain and strife,
I used to be so lonely and withdrawn,
But now the darkness is gone,
For you give me abundant light,
To last long through the darkest night,
Now I feel the warmth of the sun on my face,
And my heart has found a happy place,
You saved me from myself and the direction I was taking,
For I was clearly making,
The wrong choices in life; but now I see the light,
And what you have done for me keeps me warm on the coldest night,
You are the kindest soul I have ever met,
Not one single moment I have spent with you do I regret,
I hope you see,
You mean everything to me,
And without you I couldn't have made it this far,
In the black shroud night you are my guiding star,
And you shine so intensly from a-far,
All I know to be true,
I know through you.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 37 [informant] => WIldfireRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )
I Hope You See

Contributed by WIldfireRose on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



I hope you see,
Just what you have done for my life,
You gave to me much more than I ever thought I would have; You set my heart free,
You took away all my pain and strife,
I used to be so lonely and withdrawn,
But now the darkness is gone,
For you give me abundant light,
To last long through the darkest night,
Now I feel the warmth of the sun on my face,
And my heart has found a happy place,
You saved me from myself and the direction I was taking,
For I was clearly making,
The wrong choices in life; but now I see the light,
And what you have done for me keeps me warm on the coldest night,
You are the kindest soul I have ever met,
Not one single moment I have spent with you do I regret,
I hope you see,
You mean everything to me,
And without you I couldn't have made it this far,
In the black shroud night you are my guiding star,
And you shine so intensly from a-far,
All I know to be true,
I know through you.





Copyright © WIldfireRose ... [ 2004-12-02 21:53:47]
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Re: I Hope You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:57:36 PM AEST
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awe this is nice i likke it


Re: I Hope You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:29:35 PM AEST
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great write... i liked it a lot...

hope to c more from u soon...

~!*!~Jishes~!*!~


Re: I Hope You See (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:31:41 AM AEST
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nice piece of work.....
hot-shot


Re: I Hope You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:28:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful write..any friend would love to get this..
Jenni




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