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A kiss of fire
He captured me
In the heat of desire
A river of passion
An ocean of ecstasy
The tides of desire
Now encompass me
A whirlwind of lust
Mixed with the fire
Fueling the flames
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Forbidden Desire

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

With lips aflame
A kiss of fire
He captured me
In the heat of desire
A river of passion
An ocean of ecstasy
The tides of desire
Now encompass me
A whirlwind of lust
Mixed with the fire
Fueling the flames
Of our forbidden Desire

Copyright Â© ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-25 09:30:00]
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Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Phildel on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 10:59:27 AM AEST
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v. nice write...i totally know all about forbidden desires!!!

Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 02:51:59 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one alot, it took me
back to a place i didnt really want to
think about, its very sad to want
someone you can't have, it hurts
alot. Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:59:10 PM AEST
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Well written Candice,
This is also an excellent write!
And pretty Hot, Hot, Hot!!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 12:35:13 AM AEST
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Dean, yes this one is rather hot. But unfortunately in my poetry is the only way that I could have this guy, because at the time he was 15 and I was 17 and it was pretty much forbidden. But he is also the one that my poem "Regretful Night" was written about. Then night that poem wa written about was only a year later. It was still forbidden but I just wasn't thinking and I regret it. I very rarely do stupod things like that.
SjadowsCloud

Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:43:47 PM AEST
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I'm glad to hear it Candice,
At least this shows that you learn from your experiences in life, more than I can say for myself mostly!Hehehe
No I'm getting much better lately at actually taking on board all this stuff I'm constantly thinking about! I hope!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Forbidden Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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Dean, I really do try to learn from my experences in life. I find that it is actually a rather smart thing to do.
ShadowsCloud

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