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The Fear You Give Me
Contributed by
renstar
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:53:41 PM in AEST
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i feel your prescence
i know when your near
my chest starts to feel tight
your footsteps bring to light my fear
my heart beats fast
and feels like its about to explode
my body shuts down
and i fall into a weakened mode
i put on a brave face and try to be strong
i feel like im dieing every second till your gone
the feeling inside me i wish it would just leave
the fear you are make me feel is
making it hard to breathe.
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Re: The Fear You Give Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:54:33 PM AEST
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you have described fear well here Renstar that feeling of finding it hard to breathe I know that well,
great expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Fear You Give Me
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by CaddishCut on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:00:37 PM AEST
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| I know this fear well. |
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Re: The Fear You Give Me
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by LaurenK on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:25:10 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I could definetely empathize with you. Good description of the fear which is felt in an abusive relationship. |
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Re: The Fear You Give Me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:26:06 PM AEST
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| great write. many people can relate. |
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Re: The Fear You Give Me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:27:00 PM AEST
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| great write. many people can relate. |
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