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Array ( [sid] => 74057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Face In The Crowd [time] => 2004-12-02 03:08:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Woke up in the morning
reflection of the sun
on an empty billboard blinding me,
in pain and so disorientated
just how i became a lost soul
is a mystery...
Looking at the Illusions that are swirling
it all seems so familiar to me
still I get this feeling
something is missing
something I need.

In the afternoon
I groove
a face in the crowd
you never see me move as I go through the motions
I have been programmed to.
Sometimes deep
within the distortion
there's a ripple and I can feel
a sense of a void
but it's quickly concealed.

many are the emotional tortures
at this moment
I cry
teardrops slowly flow
a black sun fills the sky,
to resist is futile
I'll never get what I really need
there is no escape
I will never ever be free.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 60 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

A Face In The Crowd

Contributed by secretwind on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:08:16 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Woke up in the morning
reflection of the sun
on an empty billboard blinding me,
in pain and so disorientated
just how i became a lost soul
is a mystery...
Looking at the Illusions that are swirling
it all seems so familiar to me
still I get this feeling
something is missing
something I need.

In the afternoon
I groove
a face in the crowd
you never see me move as I go through the motions
I have been programmed to.
Sometimes deep
within the distortion
there's a ripple and I can feel
a sense of a void
but it's quickly concealed.

many are the emotional tortures
at this moment
I cry
teardrops slowly flow
a black sun fills the sky,
to resist is futile
I'll never get what I really need
there is no escape
I will never ever be free.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-12-02 03:08:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Face In The Crowd (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:42:51 AM AEST
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Very sad write. It brings tears but very well said.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Face In The Crowd (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:48:31 AM AEST
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well put i like the line:
a black sun fills the sky

very good

persia

Re: A Face In The Crowd (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:31:06 AM AEST
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awww, secret,
i'm here when you need me,
i'll help set you freee.
no mater what it takes...
GREAT WRITE

*~givingin~*

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