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Array ( [sid] => 74029 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. [time] => 2004-12-01 22:40:24 [hometext] => if anyone bothers to comment, i will be astounded!!! not that anyone here comments anyway, you know who you are. dirty ******* [bodytext] => These old fingers just won't work tonight.
My brain is rotted out, just for today.
Nothing comes to mind to write,
No love, no hate, nothing and nothing.
An endless sea of ravings and madness,
Lost under a sky of senselessness.
I wander thru thoughts and meanings, waiting for responses.
This is the thing I hate most,
Wanting it to come out of you, a million miles an hour;
But it won't, it refuses to be controlled.
Sifting thru my day, I find nothing of interest.
Not to write with, just for reflection.
This is the only way to conquer it though,
To write, to let it pass.
Later on though, you'll see,
I will have created something to envy,
And you'll be sorry you neglected to bother with this dribble.
Because you won't know about the masterpeice to come. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 25 [informant] => deadreckoning1983 [notes] => Moderator 9 Bleep word 12/01/04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed.

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:40:24 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

These old fingers just won't work tonight.
My brain is rotted out, just for today.
Nothing comes to mind to write,
No love, no hate, nothing and nothing.
An endless sea of ravings and madness,
Lost under a sky of senselessness.
I wander thru thoughts and meanings, waiting for responses.
This is the thing I hate most,
Wanting it to come out of you, a million miles an hour;
But it won't, it refuses to be controlled.
Sifting thru my day, I find nothing of interest.
Not to write with, just for reflection.
This is the only way to conquer it though,
To write, to let it pass.
Later on though, you'll see,
I will have created something to envy,
And you'll be sorry you neglected to bother with this dribble.
Because you won't know about the masterpeice to come.

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2004-12-01 22:40:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:58:53 PM AEST
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Little flows from your pen Dean, that is less than exceptional. This included.

Hope the block has been lifted.

Nazzy ~

Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:12:58 PM AEST
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very well done and up theirs if they dont read or comment each word is a masterpiece
Michelle

Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:38:02 PM AEST
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You are making me laugh again,
you sly SOB!

Groovy.

--Mothy

Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:02:51 PM AEST
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Dane, this was awesome...And you're right, someday, you'll show 'em all...I thought this was quite the masterpiece though

Mason

Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:34:11 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, somedays I want to get something out,I don't know whta, but I feel the urge... but it never comes. I liked this one. Good write, it was nery climatic. I didn't know where it was going, good ending.

Re: Knowing That Here And Now, I Failed. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 02:04:52 PM AEST
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That author's note made me laugh:)

So, at what point while writing this did you realize you were in fact, writing? Us writers are tough on ourselves...Are we all emotional spazzes? Yes! Yes, we are. How great is that ending...It stings, but I thought you were a crab? :)

~Scorp

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