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All Alone
Contributed by
evilcherry312
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:04:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting here,
I wonder why.
Why I'm all alone.
I'm surrounded by
people, and I've
never felt more lost.
Sitting here,
I think I know,
But not even
God knows.
Nobody knows
who I am,
because I'm afraid
to show them.
If I show myself
naked to you, will
you run away?
I am a hidden
treasure; people
search their lives
for me.
When they think
they know, they open
the chest only to find another map.
Sitting here
I wonder how.
How did it get this way?
I started to reveal
myself, only to find
that in reality, I
am what nobody
ever wanted.
I cry for you,
knowing I can never
have you.
Sitting here
beside you,
I miss you more
than ever.
You want another,
the other wants
no one,
and I want you.
Too many days
of extreme stupidity.
I cry for you,
knowing you won't cry for me.
You shed a single tear
when death knocked at
my door.
I aimlessly wander,
more alone than ever,
through this world
filled with people.
They laugh, they cry,
they mock, they sneer,
I hope some for me,
but since no,
Then I keep walking.
Only I sit.
So, sitting here
I wonder why.
Why am I all alone?
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evilcherry312
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Re: All Alone
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:55:27 PM AEST
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| this is sad and by the way i like cherries most of all evil ones |
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Re: All Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:03:06 PM AEST
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| excellent write. being alone, someone once said if you have an intelligent mind you are never alone. a kid once said if you have an imaginary friend you arent alone. |
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Re: All Alone
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:14:42 AM AEST
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Great write... the feeling of being alone is a terrible one to have... i'm sorry this is how u feel... hopefully one day u won't be alone...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: All Alone
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by evilcherry312 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:57:50 PM AEST
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| hello. no, i don't feel this way anymore; as i said, it's a very old poem of mine. but i like having it around to remind me of what i've conquered. |
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Re: All Alone
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by LittleMANof04 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:49:33 PM AEST
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| yes, this is a good write. captures a lot of depressed and confused emotion. it's good to hear you are doing better. |
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Re: All Alone
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:29:37 PM AEST
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Well done.
I agree with you on keeping this poem.In everything I believe we grow.
Sinned |
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