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Array ( [sid] => 73968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold Death [time] => 2004-12-01 16:13:40 [hometext] => This poem is about myself hating the world and what it has become. I still feel that way, and in a way, It is dedicated to Bush. Since he fits one of the heartless monsters so well. [bodytext] => Dark, the world is dark and cold,
With all the happiness deprived.
What is to be of this second hell?
The tears of a girl
The evil is winning.
It is a deadly game
No one ever caring that the good is dying.
Horrible. A girl crying in the dark.
No one will listen, too concerned with themselves to care.
Another death.
I weep. I cry for the lost child that met her horrible end.
I alone. They pretend that they care, but tomorrow, it’ll be forgotten.
They will all forget that little girl that died trying to stop the evil from spreading.
I won’t, I care.
My tears will be the only ones shed for the orphan girl.
I cry. This world, this living hell they call home, is not my home.
I truly am lost, I want to go home. I need a real home to go to.

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Cold Death

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dark, the world is dark and cold,
With all the happiness deprived.
What is to be of this second hell?
The tears of a girl
The evil is winning.
It is a deadly game
No one ever caring that the good is dying.
Horrible. A girl crying in the dark.
No one will listen, too concerned with themselves to care.
Another death.
I weep. I cry for the lost child that met her horrible end.
I alone. They pretend that they care, but tomorrow, it’ll be forgotten.
They will all forget that little girl that died trying to stop the evil from spreading.
I won’t, I care.
My tears will be the only ones shed for the orphan girl.
I cry. This world, this living hell they call home, is not my home.
I truly am lost, I want to go home. I need a real home to go to.

Copyright Â© DesolantDreamer ... [ 2004-12-01 16:13:40]
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Re: Cold Death (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:40:04 PM AEST
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i hear ya. there are times when all of the nonsense, and evil, and greed takes so much of me that i don't even know why i should stick around. but there are ppl who care and i'm willing to sit this one thru until i find that good. i hope you will too. take care.

Re: Cold Death (User Rating: 1 )
by xMizeriex on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:32:58 AM AEST
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I totaly agree with what you're saying. Well done.

Bx

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