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Snapped your soul clean in two,
I was sick of your childish taunts,
Fed up with having a mind that you haunt.

You never thought I would snap,
I’d just had enough of all your crap,
In my head I could see your sneering face,
That was something I just had to erase.

I bided my time I waited & waited,
For a prime opportunity my breath was baited,
But when it came I was ready to pounce,
Kick the ***** out of you, every last ounce.

You looked so pitiful crying like a new born babe,
Asking me to spare your life your soul to save,
I laughed & danced around your lifeless form,
Over the years with your torment you’d caused a storm.

I held nothing back, mercy you didn’t deserve,
Now your ugly corpse I really want to preserve,
I want to keep it as a token that I won,
As breaking you was so much fun.

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I Broke You

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:53:15 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I was the one who broke you,
Snapped your soul clean in two,
I was sick of your childish taunts,
Fed up with having a mind that you haunt.

You never thought I would snap,
I’d just had enough of all your crap,
In my head I could see your sneering face,
That was something I just had to erase.

I bided my time I waited & waited,
For a prime opportunity my breath was baited,
But when it came I was ready to pounce,
Kick the ***** out of you, every last ounce.

You looked so pitiful crying like a new born babe,
Asking me to spare your life your soul to save,
I laughed & danced around your lifeless form,
Over the years with your torment you’d caused a storm.

I held nothing back, mercy you didn’t deserve,
Now your ugly corpse I really want to preserve,
I want to keep it as a token that I won,
As breaking you was so much fun.





Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-12-01 11:53:15]
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Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:57:20 AM AEST
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Wow pixie dear that was very power and dark.lol
awsome write .keep them coming. :)

hugs


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:38:53 PM AEST
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woe... wow.. You told him off. and how wow. great poem. masterpiece.


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:02:13 PM AEST
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wow a great write and an even better move


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie, very powerful and dark, excellent poem as always

Love Dawny xxx


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:57:19 PM AEST
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you want to preserve an ugly corpse..my God....Aww..you funny girl..hugs..taker care :-) venkat


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:16:37 PM AEST
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Oh yeah !!! Vengence, retaliatory retribution, triumphant survivor tales !!! Kick some bass, Pixie. Grab your pole, were goin fishin. Stoppin by the taxidermist later and gettin that SOB stuffed and mounted. Lets see how he likes that !!! Whoooooo Hoooooo !!!

Great write pixie .... sorry ... I, I, Uh don't know what came over me !!!

Nazmythian ~


Re: I Broke You (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:35:51 PM AEST
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The pain and the pleasure
of thee attack
hmm
so sweeet.

The Wind




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