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Array ( [sid] => 73827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Existence [time] => 2004-11-30 18:55:22 [hometext] => idk wat topic to put it under, plz comment [bodytext] => Darkness rules
Rage reaches out to take the innocence
Death drifts through the world
Fears consume the heart
Fire spreads throughout the soul
Life ends
What happened?
Where is everyone?
Who am I?
Is this dream or reality?
So much about this world is true
Yet so much can not be possible
But it is
Where to go?
Evil extends its hand of hate
Light vanishes
Nothing left
Love is nearly extinct
But some distant glimmer, shows past everything
Hope?
A child’s eyes that see only the good and truth in people
Past darkness and death
Past Rage and hate
Past pure evil
We let these things rule our lives because we forget
We forget the one true thing that wills us to live and not to be defeated
A child that only has hope and is oblivious to all other things

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kisser89 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Existence

Contributed by kisser89 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:55:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Darkness rules
Rage reaches out to take the innocence
Death drifts through the world
Fears consume the heart
Fire spreads throughout the soul
Life ends
What happened?
Where is everyone?
Who am I?
Is this dream or reality?
So much about this world is true
Yet so much can not be possible
But it is
Where to go?
Evil extends its hand of hate
Light vanishes
Nothing left
Love is nearly extinct
But some distant glimmer, shows past everything
Hope?
A child’s eyes that see only the good and truth in people
Past darkness and death
Past Rage and hate
Past pure evil
We let these things rule our lives because we forget
We forget the one true thing that wills us to live and not to be defeated
A child that only has hope and is oblivious to all other things

Copyright Â© kisser89 ... [ 2004-11-30 18:55:22]
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Re: Existence (User Rating: 1 )
by xMizeriex on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:25:07 PM AEST
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That was an amazing poem, I can't believe no one had commented on that before myself. Good job, keep going ^_^
Bx

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