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Array ( [sid] => 73805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will We Ever? [time] => 2004-11-30 17:29:27 [hometext] => An interesting take on life....If you take the time to read, please take the time to comment...I'd really appreciate it....=) [bodytext] => In a world where
Each mystery solved
Produces three more
Will we ever
Solve the mystery of life?

In a video game where
Each level beaten
Produces three more
Will we ever
Beat this game?

In a maze where
Each path followed
Produces three more
Will we ever
Find a way out?

In a story where
Each truth
Produces three lies
Will we ever
Discover the true tale?

And if we do
Solve the mystery
Beat the game
Find a way out
Discover the truth
Will we be in
Heaven or Hell
And how will we know? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Live2Die [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Will We Ever?

Contributed by Live2Die on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

In a world where
Each mystery solved
Produces three more
Will we ever
Solve the mystery of life?

In a video game where
Each level beaten
Produces three more
Will we ever
Beat this game?

In a maze where
Each path followed
Produces three more
Will we ever
Find a way out?

In a story where
Each truth
Produces three lies
Will we ever
Discover the true tale?

And if we do
Solve the mystery
Beat the game
Find a way out
Discover the truth
Will we be in
Heaven or Hell
And how will we know?

Copyright © Live2Die ... [ 2004-11-30 17:29:27]
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Re: Will We Ever? (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:48:36 PM AEST
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wow...that is osm...its so tru 2!...haha...good job

Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~

Re: Will We Ever? (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:30:05 PM AEST
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Great poem.

You kept introducing new ideas
to ponder but maintained the
sole question.
Without being boring
and redundant.

--Mothy

Re: Will We Ever? (User Rating: 1 )
by MasterWeasel on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:25:16 AM AEST
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Well, this type of writing is not my cup of tea to be honest...I'm more into bound verse; that is my style. I have no say in this peice, really...but it seems to me that you are honestly trying to express yourself and that's all you need

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