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Array ( [sid] => 73796 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => + A letter to fate+ [time] => 2004-11-30 16:46:31 [hometext] => i am talking to fate itself... [bodytext] => I don't need a introduction,
You already know who i am,
Im finally confronting you,
What else do you want from me?
You've made my life a living hell,
You've turn my family against each other,
And now i am left to pick up the pieces,
Left to work a full time job while doing school,
I dont get much sleep anymore, i'm contently working,
To help my mom get back on her feet,
While i suffer, all my time and energy is now gone,
I can't even enjoy the simple things in life,
You've taken all i've ever had,
I now have nothing else to lose
You took my dreams and hopes,
My family and my happiness,
And i am left with nothing.
So with all this said, i feel better,
only thing you have not taken from me,
is me,
and when your feeling lucky enough
come and get me, i'm no longer afraid [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => AdamChantell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

+ A letter to fate+

Contributed by AdamChantell on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:46:31 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don't need a introduction,
You already know who i am,
Im finally confronting you,
What else do you want from me?
You've made my life a living hell,
You've turn my family against each other,
And now i am left to pick up the pieces,
Left to work a full time job while doing school,
I dont get much sleep anymore, i'm contently working,
To help my mom get back on her feet,
While i suffer, all my time and energy is now gone,
I can't even enjoy the simple things in life,
You've taken all i've ever had,
I now have nothing else to lose
You took my dreams and hopes,
My family and my happiness,
And i am left with nothing.
So with all this said, i feel better,
only thing you have not taken from me,
is me,
and when your feeling lucky enough
come and get me, i'm no longer afraid

Copyright © AdamChantell ... [ 2004-11-30 16:46:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: + A letter to fate+ (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:07:57 PM AEST
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Woah. Thats all I can say to this...that and I am so sorry for your pain and losses...ever wanna talk I'm here.

Re: + A letter to fate+ (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:26:15 PM AEST
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really good write .. i hope things turn out alright and i am truly sorry for all the things you are going through .. you must have a rough life .. and thats such a shame .. and i really really hope light shines through to you soon ..

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