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Array ( [sid] => 73762 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain starts to grow [time] => 2004-11-30 13:06:57 [hometext] => When a love one is sick, The pain is there and hope that it don't get worse. But you know it will, when they pass away. [bodytext] => Nose tingling,
Tears flooding my eyes,
Thoughts of tomorrow
Come here today,
Wishing I will never see the day
I dont want to see it,
Don't even say
Can't hold it
Don't want to know it
Just let me run away.

Pain already here,
Knowing and waiting,
Darkness is in the sky
No light in the tunnel
No beating of the heart
That is the way it will be
The day that we will part.

Tears behind the lids,
Waiting to appear,
Feeling the ache inside
wish it would disappear.

Don't want to touch it,
Don't want to hold it,
Want to let go of it,
and let it disappear.
Can't grasp it,
Can't shake it,
Won't allow it,
Please help me dear.

The pain is too early,
Everything is ok,
I can lay it down
I can make it go away.

But some day
But some way
But some time
it will be here.

Pain is growing now again
and now here comes the tears. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 486 [topic] => 32 [informant] => sandy_poetrygodslove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Pain starts to grow

Contributed by sandy_poetrygodslove on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Nose tingling,
Tears flooding my eyes,
Thoughts of tomorrow
Come here today,
Wishing I will never see the day
I dont want to see it,
Don't even say
Can't hold it
Don't want to know it
Just let me run away.

Pain already here,
Knowing and waiting,
Darkness is in the sky
No light in the tunnel
No beating of the heart
That is the way it will be
The day that we will part.

Tears behind the lids,
Waiting to appear,
Feeling the ache inside
wish it would disappear.

Don't want to touch it,
Don't want to hold it,
Want to let go of it,
and let it disappear.
Can't grasp it,
Can't shake it,
Won't allow it,
Please help me dear.

The pain is too early,
Everything is ok,
I can lay it down
I can make it go away.

But some day
But some way
But some time
it will be here.

Pain is growing now again
and now here comes the tears.

Copyright © sandy_poetrygodslove ... [ 2004-11-30 13:06:57]
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Re: Pain starts to grow (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:09:08 PM AEST
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It's that horrible feeling that you have when your child is missing. It grips you with such intense fear...and then, in an instant, it is gone. I felt that while away in NY last week, and I understand what you were feeling here. You described it very well.
Stitch

Re: Pain starts to grow (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:17:51 PM AEST
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This is how my faimly must feel as i become sicker by the day with HIV/AIDS. You write your thoughts very very well Thanks for sharing it brought a tear to my heart.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Pain starts to grow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyaryssa on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:36:14 PM AEST
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"But some day
But some way
But some time
it will be here."

I didn't like this bit. Not overly sure why, I just didn't think it fit. Try to avoid getting cliche with your imagery, but at least you use it, kudos for that.

The first and fourth stanzas I liked very much. Promising stuff!

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