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Array ( [sid] => 73743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WHOLE [time] => 2004-11-30 10:27:00 [hometext] => Finaly...Letting myself be whole...& all of me... [bodytext] => Drifted afloat for years, inert in the endless dark sea of nothing,
…Mute & Void….
Without my much craved latitude…
Without a true purpose…
Caught in a between selves’ feud.. (Because I shut her out )
But once we set our differences aside (& I apologised)
I embraced the rest of me….
Together conjoined in compromise
We became a seed in whut we then instead perceived as
A fertile sea of life & creations…
With soft tongue rambling prayer & incantations…
…We evolved & grew..
..As a new whole built of two…
…Siamese twin,
…Half & half,
The same now sharing we coincide,
With thoughts & feelings synchronised ..
In which we were fortified.
‘WE’ are ‘I’…
..Making ‘ME’
….As my own creation built from the empty…
Took hold of the opportunity.
& where once embryonic
I now rise from my black shell of pearl
Like a prisoner on parole,
Like Aphrodite..
As putrid perfection
& destructive beauty.
…Liberated…
…Uninhibited…
A wild, savage creature
That walks between the silken twighlight veils
Of this world & the next…
I am untameable rage,
& uncontrollable mind flowing out onto the page…
Contently agonised,
Ripped up inside…
..Insatiable..
…Unstable…
Feeding off fear,
Anger
& pain..
Enjoying confrontation,
the adrenalin rush of violent fighting…
Over & over again…
…& Winning the war
In which I am a martyr.
…I will not loose…
…I will outlast…
Who am I?
..I am a warrior.
Confident of their skills
In a detrimental regiment…
& I am the lethal weapon wield
Marching forward in holy ascent.
…A rise from grace….
But not only am I the weapon..
I’m also the wound where it impaled…
…These paper walls…
As word becomes flesh
…& I cannibal…


© Dominick destruction 16th oct 2004……..
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Dominick-destruction [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
WHOLE

Contributed by Dominick-destruction on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:27:00 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Drifted afloat for years, inert in the endless dark sea of nothing,
…Mute & Void….
Without my much craved latitude…
Without a true purpose…
Caught in a between selves’ feud.. (Because I shut her out )
But once we set our differences aside (& I apologised)
I embraced the rest of me….
Together conjoined in compromise
We became a seed in whut we then instead perceived as
A fertile sea of life & creations…
With soft tongue rambling prayer & incantations…
…We evolved & grew..
..As a new whole built of two…
…Siamese twin,
…Half & half,
The same now sharing we coincide,
With thoughts & feelings synchronised ..
In which we were fortified.
‘WE’ are ‘I’…
..Making ‘ME’
….As my own creation built from the empty…
Took hold of the opportunity.
& where once embryonic
I now rise from my black shell of pearl
Like a prisoner on parole,
Like Aphrodite..
As putrid perfection
& destructive beauty.
…Liberated…
…Uninhibited…
A wild, savage creature
That walks between the silken twighlight veils
Of this world & the next…
I am untameable rage,
& uncontrollable mind flowing out onto the page…
Contently agonised,
Ripped up inside…
..Insatiable..
…Unstable…
Feeding off fear,
Anger
& pain..
Enjoying confrontation,
the adrenalin rush of violent fighting…
Over & over again…
…& Winning the war
In which I am a martyr.
…I will not loose…
…I will outlast…
Who am I?
..I am a warrior.
Confident of their skills
In a detrimental regiment…
& I am the lethal weapon wield
Marching forward in holy ascent.
…A rise from grace….
But not only am I the weapon..
I’m also the wound where it impaled…
…These paper walls…
As word becomes flesh
…& I cannibal…


© Dominick destruction 16th oct 2004……..




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Re: WHOLE (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:31:12 AM AEST
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wow, I dont know what to say apart from thjat was really powerful and i really loved it

pixie xx


Re: WHOLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Dominick-Destruction on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:34:47 AM AEST
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Thank you huni *kisu*...It's one of my more personal pieces...
I'm gonna go comment on lots of your lovely writings later...But I have to go to band practice now...so laters ^_^
xDDx




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