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My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you

Its so cold
Cold like your heart
You left me standing there alone
I heard you went out with him
I started to follow you
I know where he lives now
Thanks too you

I'm alone
My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you

I'm feeling cold
My heart is as cold as yours now
I watched you leave
I busted in tossing him down
Now he's dead
I'm standing there with tears in my eyes
Thanks too you

I'm alone
My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you
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Thanks too you

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:57:50 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I'm alone
My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you

Its so cold
Cold like your heart
You left me standing there alone
I heard you went out with him
I started to follow you
I know where he lives now
Thanks too you

I'm alone
My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you

I'm feeling cold
My heart is as cold as yours now
I watched you leave
I busted in tossing him down
Now he's dead
I'm standing there with tears in my eyes
Thanks too you

I'm alone
My heart was left in two
My memories haunt me
Thanks too you

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-11-30 09:57:50]
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Re: Thanks too you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:02:42 AM AEST
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awwww a very sad piece, written well,

pixie xx

Re: Thanks too you (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:29:30 PM AEST
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Wow this was so powerful

Excellent poem loved it
May your sadness heal soon

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: Thanks too you (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:24:09 PM AEST
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aww,such a sad emotional powered poem,i really liked this,and in away ur not alone,i know how the feeling feels,so i guess ur not alone and i'm not either...yay for us!just try to move on,its gonna be hard but its the only thing u can do thats healthy for u and everyone around u that loves u,ur gonna be thinken alot,up all night wondering what happened,trying to work things out,nothing will work but space and time,great poem,keep up the great job!!

savedbydeath

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