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[title] => HAIKU LOGIC
[time] => 2004-11-30 09:00:51
[hometext] => Good advice for the wino
[bodytext] => If the grape is ripe,
The wine from the vine is fine..
If rot..Drink ye not.
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HAIKU LOGIC
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norm
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:00:51 AM in AEST
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If the grape is ripe,
The wine from the vine is fine..
If rot..Drink ye not.
Copyright ©
norm
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2004-11-30 09:00:51]
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:09:32 AM AEST
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hehe good haiku
pixie xx |
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by skraggs on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:14:09 AM AEST
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| so simple and so true |
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:29:49 AM AEST
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great haiku norm, i love it:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:59:10 PM AEST
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If Haiku is right for you,
I hope that you can make it do
as for me, I'd rather see
a limerick hanging from a tree.
Stitch |
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:09:47 AM AEST
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| lol. great haiku. |
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Re: HAIKU LOGIC
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 03:31:33 PM AEST
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Hi there Norm Turkel,
It's so fun to be put back in the Well!!!!
Now I have someone I can pester
Just like my old Pooka Lester
What would you know about Winos anyway,
You're not one, but booze too much each day.
But I'll try to remember what you say.;
I still can't a limerick to save my soul
To do so, make take it's toll.
Just think, I'd end up just like you
BoooooooHoooooo!
Warm love to a good pal,
I've missed you so much
ConSue |
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