Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 13:53:43 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 73706 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Caliginous Ardor [time] => 2004-11-30 01:29:34 [hometext] => The title is suposed to mean dark and firey feelings, but Im not sure if thats the correct way to put it..... oh well, here we go..... [bodytext] => I open my blinds and see the dark
Life seems to be oh so stark
My heart bleeds a shade of turmoil
Here to sleep and there to toil

And thus I bled
And tears of naught I shall shed
Only to see this translucent life
Through the watery, teary eyes of strife

If not for naught for this
Then thus shall be for a kiss
A heart made of stone
Shall forever be alone

And if one is always alone
Will two follow it all the way home?
Will three and four go to the door
And let in five just to bring more

With more numbers about
Is one of them filled with clout
Just becuase people are arround
Does that person truly feel found

People may cry
Yet not know why
Their lives seem to fail
And thus sorrow shall trail

To the end we ride
Never to run or hide
Me, and my one and only fellow
My lonely self, and my shadow [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Caliginous Ardor

Contributed by kyletycz on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:29:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I open my blinds and see the dark
Life seems to be oh so stark
My heart bleeds a shade of turmoil
Here to sleep and there to toil

And thus I bled
And tears of naught I shall shed
Only to see this translucent life
Through the watery, teary eyes of strife

If not for naught for this
Then thus shall be for a kiss
A heart made of stone
Shall forever be alone

And if one is always alone
Will two follow it all the way home?
Will three and four go to the door
And let in five just to bring more

With more numbers about
Is one of them filled with clout
Just becuase people are arround
Does that person truly feel found

People may cry
Yet not know why
Their lives seem to fail
And thus sorrow shall trail

To the end we ride
Never to run or hide
Me, and my one and only fellow
My lonely self, and my shadow

Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-11-30 01:29:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Caliginous Ardor (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:47:00 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well structured poem, though sorry to say didnt feel dark to me, but liked the write, and the images you painted, so cool poem.

Re: Caliginous Ardor (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:41:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sad but very thought provking.
I know the feelings. Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com