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Array ( [sid] => 73698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Poem for A Shattered Heart [time] => 2004-11-29 23:50:41 [hometext] => i read a poem that was so sad that i had to write one for it please do read and please do comment this is a bit important [bodytext] => How could you feel unpretty?

When the truth is that you are very

With such kindness in your eyes and heart

How could you feel so torn apart?

Who would do this to you?

And make you feel that way

Who could do this to angel?

Make you hurt so much

That you can’t drive the tears away

Teas and taunt you and make you fear touch

Steal your heart away and then leave

Love you one day and then make you greave

Make you feel wanted then kill what you believe

How could you feel unpretty?

When the truth is that you are very

With such kindness in your eyes and heart

How could you feel so torn apart?

How can I help put the pieces back in place?

How can I help bring a smile to your face?

If I can do anything let me know

Tell me what you want to see

And that is what I will show

How could they use you in their games?

And fill your life with so much shame

You are really very kind

And your true beauty brightly shines

It is your soul and it reflects in all your words

Powerful, beautiful, brilliant, and very sad

Tormented but still great words

How could you be made to feel so bad?

That I will never know

How could some one ever

Shatter your precious heart
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A Poem for A Shattered Heart

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



How could you feel unpretty?

When the truth is that you are very

With such kindness in your eyes and heart

How could you feel so torn apart?

Who would do this to you?

And make you feel that way

Who could do this to angel?

Make you hurt so much

That you can’t drive the tears away

Teas and taunt you and make you fear touch

Steal your heart away and then leave

Love you one day and then make you greave

Make you feel wanted then kill what you believe

How could you feel unpretty?

When the truth is that you are very

With such kindness in your eyes and heart

How could you feel so torn apart?

How can I help put the pieces back in place?

How can I help bring a smile to your face?

If I can do anything let me know

Tell me what you want to see

And that is what I will show

How could they use you in their games?

And fill your life with so much shame

You are really very kind

And your true beauty brightly shines

It is your soul and it reflects in all your words

Powerful, beautiful, brilliant, and very sad

Tormented but still great words

How could you be made to feel so bad?

That I will never know

How could some one ever

Shatter your precious heart




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-29 23:50:41]
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Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:11:04 AM AEST
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The answer to how could they, simple its because they can.
Until people change their ways this world is just going to carry on going downhill.
Beautiful poem by the way.


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:30:06 AM AEST
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know what's beautiful dorien...you. The fact that you want to repair a tender, shattered heart and make it all better..fix someone's boo-boo..That's what I find incredible and lovable and beautiful..


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:33:26 AM AEST
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nice poem, i liked it alot, you could use a little spell checking though, just for future references, nice write

l8r

Ninja Tycz


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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this is amazing,
thank you..................


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:15:19 AM AEST
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awww that was sweet, very nice write, awwww lol

pixie xx


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:15:17 PM AEST
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I love it. Thankyou...(tear) lol :) You just made my day so much brighter...

- Rachelle


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:18:44 PM AEST
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very nice...wish more people were like you


Re: A Poem for A Shattered Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:01:44 AM AEST
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vaympre_Blood said it. How could they because they can, because they can use you for their own pleasure and nothing more. I also agree w/ autumngreeneyes. You wanting to peice a shattered heart back together is awesome, thanks*. Great write.




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