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[sid] => 73692
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Daddy
[time] => 2004-11-29 22:32:00
[hometext] => this is my first poem that i have written. feel free to leave any comments on what i can do to make it better, anything....... this is about my father....
[bodytext] => Daddy what happened Everythings a mess. Daddy what happened You used to be the best. Daddy what happened Your turning into a man I don't know. Daddy what happened Oops! You dropped your bag of snow. Daddy what happened Your always on edge. Daddy what happened This is your third day in bed. Daddy what happened How come i'm not your little girl anymore? Daddy what happened What is that pipe for? Daddy what happened Why are you acting so mean? Daddy what happened Mommy told me you are a crackphene. Daddy what happened Your tearing our family apart. Daddy what happened You seem to have no heart. Daddy what happened You never were this way. Daddy what happened What do you have to say? Daddy what happened I don't think I love you anymore. Daddy what happened My heart is now very sore. Daddy what happened Where have you gone? Daddy what happened Daddy? Daddy? Daddy's gone..... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 48 [informant] => JaimeStar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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