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Array ( [sid] => 73690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cuts [time] => 2004-11-29 22:29:14 [hometext] => How I always feel [bodytext] => I will cut once again
Until I cut away
The parts of my life
That seem to decay

So I can be perfect for "mom the master"
Obviously I'm a failure anyway
She's too busy finding the wrong in me
To hear what I have to say

So I just cut away the wrong
Until I'm perfect like she wants me
I'll slice and slice until I'm gone
Maybe then she'll finally see [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => upomik [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Cuts

Contributed by upomik on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:29:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I will cut once again
Until I cut away
The parts of my life
That seem to decay

So I can be perfect for "mom the master"
Obviously I'm a failure anyway
She's too busy finding the wrong in me
To hear what I have to say

So I just cut away the wrong
Until I'm perfect like she wants me
I'll slice and slice until I'm gone
Maybe then she'll finally see

Copyright © upomik ... [ 2004-11-29 22:29:14]
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Re: Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:22:38 AM AEST
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Yeh maybe she will, but in the end you both, lose, she loses a child and you lose you.
Cool write.

Re: Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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This is so sad, yet it is a great write. Please don't anything you might regret. Thanks for sharing this great poem.

Re: Cuts (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry_Stitch on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:18:21 AM AEST
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One thing about SI, it never works. Its just your addiction you cant get enough of

Correct?

Im a cutter. so i know.

Good poem though

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