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Array ( [sid] => 7369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A PAPER'S PLEA [time] => 2002-11-24 10:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am writing my thoughts on paper to get them out of my head
I'm turning to you, because you had an impact on me by the words that you said
I believed in myself when you told me that everything would be alright
I knew I could make it through if i would just fight
All I had to do to win with everything for me
was believe in myself and turn to you because you could already see
So now you know the words I write can be a majestic work of art
well. . .only if you and I were not so far apart
then you ask me why I write my thoughts on paper
well, it is just a thing that I do
I turn to my mind and my mind turns to you
You see, you help my mind
make me understand
cause I can read and re-read
the words written by my hand
so PAPER to answer you question
about why I always write on you
you see my friend
it is just a thing that I do
but I am always writing on my friend
kind of annoying and frustrating I hear
I don't think that my friend likes it
but it won't say anything because I might yell in its ear
then again I feel bad
and apologize for being mean
but I go back and do it again
this time writing things more obscene
of course you know
my friend is always there
because everybody knows
PAPER won't go anywhere [comments] => 4 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 7 [informant] => unpredictable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
A PAPER'S PLEA

Contributed by unpredictable on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



I am writing my thoughts on paper to get them out of my head
I'm turning to you, because you had an impact on me by the words that you said
I believed in myself when you told me that everything would be alright
I knew I could make it through if i would just fight
All I had to do to win with everything for me
was believe in myself and turn to you because you could already see
So now you know the words I write can be a majestic work of art
well. . .only if you and I were not so far apart
then you ask me why I write my thoughts on paper
well, it is just a thing that I do
I turn to my mind and my mind turns to you
You see, you help my mind
make me understand
cause I can read and re-read
the words written by my hand
so PAPER to answer you question
about why I always write on you
you see my friend
it is just a thing that I do
but I am always writing on my friend
kind of annoying and frustrating I hear
I don't think that my friend likes it
but it won't say anything because I might yell in its ear
then again I feel bad
and apologize for being mean
but I go back and do it again
this time writing things more obscene
of course you know
my friend is always there
because everybody knows
PAPER won't go anywhere




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Re: A PAPER'S PLEA (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 02:54:47 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written
it's very creative and the title goes
with the poem very nicely, Thanks
for sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: A PAPER'S PLEA (User Rating: 1 )
by Smooth on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:35:20 PM AEST
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This started out wonderful, some great lines within this work, and I love the theme. What a great concept, I thought it became weaker towards the end, but after such a strong start, hard to stay at that level. To me it was almost like you settled for a shorter ending. Great idea, great concept, some exceptional lines. Makes me want to read more of your work.

Smooth


Re: A PAPER'S PLEA (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 07:52:23 PM AEST
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I agree with Smooth to some extent - the first part I was really taken with your words, thinking you were talking to a lover ... and then realised half way it was the Paper ... and then it ended with some humour - but I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to reading more from you as well.

Cheers DreamWeaver


Re: A PAPER'S PLEA (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:27:11 AM AEST
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This is good




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