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Array ( [sid] => 73664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promising forever [time] => 2004-11-29 20:32:44 [hometext] => for my Marc...he really enjoyed this poem. [bodytext] => Slow hands moving together,
sweet kisses promising forever,
and a gentil hug holding me close,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Eyes telling me no lies,
a mouth carassing every inch of who i am,
your body meets mine
bringing a world to life,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Our hearts so close,
even with the distance
a love nothing can break,
and those oh so sweet
kisses that promise forever
make everythinhg alright,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Your the one i cant
stay away from,
thses gentil hands that fit in mine
make my heart beat faster,
that smile you have when you
see me, melts me inside.
And those oh so sweet kisses
that promise forever.....

Baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 2 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Promising forever

Contributed by gery_giggles on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Slow hands moving together,
sweet kisses promising forever,
and a gentil hug holding me close,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Eyes telling me no lies,
a mouth carassing every inch of who i am,
your body meets mine
bringing a world to life,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Our hearts so close,
even with the distance
a love nothing can break,
and those oh so sweet
kisses that promise forever
make everythinhg alright,
baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Your the one i cant
stay away from,
thses gentil hands that fit in mine
make my heart beat faster,
that smile you have when you
see me, melts me inside.
And those oh so sweet kisses
that promise forever.....

Baby i think this is a good
thing we have.

Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-11-29 20:32:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Promising forever (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:36:35 PM AEST
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Awww...so sweet and romantic. I love it!

- Rachelle

Re: Promising forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Niccy on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:45:54 PM AEST
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That is so sweet, it's a really good poem. I bet he did like it.

Re: Promising forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:55:29 PM AEST
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great poem! there's so much love in it!

Re: Promising forever (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:25:16 AM AEST
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long time no hear from you Gerry, what a lovely and cute write, very sweet and so awwwwww lol

pixie xx

Re: Promising forever (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:50:20 PM AEST
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awww that's too cute!! good job and keep writing!!

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