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Array ( [sid] => 73623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide [time] => 2004-11-29 16:50:18 [hometext] => Around the holidays Loved ones that are gone are deeply missed................ [bodytext] => SUICIDE......
This is for A friend
I had, they say he
lost his mind,
He took his own life
"willingly",
before it was his time...........

Now he's gone,
I still see his face,
SUICIDE,
had to get out of this
place.........

What kind of Horror,
fills this world with
Pain?
So much that all our
Children,
Would take their lives,
in Vain?..........
Just 21, barely learned to
LIve,
"SUICIDE"
Nothing left to give......

I grieve now, not just
for him,
but for our Wretched Souls,
We made this Hell We LIve
in,
And now it takes it's toll,
it's useless to speculate,
"SUICIDE"
Now it's just to late........................

by: ~*$av $auci*~ 03 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 36 [informant] => DesperateSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide

Contributed by DesperateSoul on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

SUICIDE......
This is for A friend
I had, they say he
lost his mind,
He took his own life
"willingly",
before it was his time...........

Now he's gone,
I still see his face,
SUICIDE,
had to get out of this
place.........

What kind of Horror,
fills this world with
Pain?
So much that all our
Children,
Would take their lives,
in Vain?..........
Just 21, barely learned to
LIve,
"SUICIDE"
Nothing left to give......

I grieve now, not just
for him,
but for our Wretched Souls,
We made this Hell We LIve
in,
And now it takes it's toll,
it's useless to speculate,
"SUICIDE"
Now it's just to late........................

by: ~*$av $auci*~ 03

Copyright © DesperateSoul ... [ 2004-11-29 16:50:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:25:24 PM AEST
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sad but I like the repetition

Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:47:06 PM AEST
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I had to have the police come out to my home and things are so wretchid..I believe the next time I'll grab at their gun so they'll shoot me.. your poem is so true..we've made this earth a hell and we have to live in it.. great write.

Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:54:01 PM AEST
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This is one of those poems that's going to pull at anyones heart who reads it. It gave me goosebumps! Sadly, you are right. We have made this hell we live in, and we're the ones paying for it. Whether it's our own misery or someone elses who's close to us, it effects everyone. A good, honest write.

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