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Array ( [sid] => 73605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm still lonely [time] => 2004-11-29 15:43:33 [hometext] => ' when the world turns its back on you...YOU turn your back on the world ' - quote from the lion king but it seemed to fit with my poem... [bodytext] => im lonely now
the world has gone as passed me up
the deep green grass where i sit is soft
as i watch people pass around me
i look up and watch them bustle
not even noticing me sitting
all alone

im lonely now
the people here are all
caught up in themselves
i wish i knew a place
where people cared for others
and saw me staring
all alone

im lonely now
with nobody to call my own
nobody to care for me or my life
the world is filled with hate
and i am a onlooker
watching people speed by me
all alone

im lonely now
these people dont even notice
they dont really seem to care
if this young girl is alive or dead
it sends my mind wandering
about whether i belong here
all alone...
...im still lonely... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 32 [informant] => xxdeathxTOxkristixx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I'm still lonely

Contributed by xxdeathxTOxkristixx on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:43:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

im lonely now
the world has gone as passed me up
the deep green grass where i sit is soft
as i watch people pass around me
i look up and watch them bustle
not even noticing me sitting
all alone

im lonely now
the people here are all
caught up in themselves
i wish i knew a place
where people cared for others
and saw me staring
all alone

im lonely now
with nobody to call my own
nobody to care for me or my life
the world is filled with hate
and i am a onlooker
watching people speed by me
all alone

im lonely now
these people dont even notice
they dont really seem to care
if this young girl is alive or dead
it sends my mind wandering
about whether i belong here
all alone...
...im still lonely...

Copyright © xxdeathxTOxkristixx ... [ 2004-11-29 15:43:33]
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Re: I'm still lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:01:46 PM AEST
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i really liked this,but ur not all alone,theres so many of us hangen around,all u need to do is look closer,and ppl do care,if u were dead ur parents would be so upset and lost and ur friends would be hurten,hey i'm hurten just by reading this,u put alot of emotional powerful feelings in this poem,i really really liked this,but u must remember we all care,and i know u care and ur definitly not lonely,great poem,keep up the awesome work

savedbydeath

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