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Array ( [sid] => 73569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Master, I Apologise [time] => 2004-11-29 11:24:51 [hometext] => I must leave you.... [bodytext] => Master I apologise,
But to you I bid my goodbyes,
You have chained me up for years,
Been the creator of my tears.

I am not going to take it,
All your beatings, all your *****,
I deserve respect not hurt,
I leave you here to die in the dirt.

You possessed me for far too long,
Next to you is not where I belong,
I am in love you try to steal it away,
You want all of my emotions to be dark & grey.

I am running, running from you,
Only cruel things to me you do,
You say you love me but you don’t,
You say you will leave me alone, but you won’t.

You stalk me & will until my death,
Take it all til there’s nothing left,
You creep around like a scary shadow,
Whispering to me so I’ll know.

No longer can & will I take your games,
I know now it isn’t me to blame,
It was never my fault it was always yours,
I have proven to be one of your uncontrollable whores.




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Master, I Apologise

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:24:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Master I apologise,
But to you I bid my goodbyes,
You have chained me up for years,
Been the creator of my tears.

I am not going to take it,
All your beatings, all your *****,
I deserve respect not hurt,
I leave you here to die in the dirt.

You possessed me for far too long,
Next to you is not where I belong,
I am in love you try to steal it away,
You want all of my emotions to be dark & grey.

I am running, running from you,
Only cruel things to me you do,
You say you love me but you don’t,
You say you will leave me alone, but you won’t.

You stalk me & will until my death,
Take it all til there’s nothing left,
You creep around like a scary shadow,
Whispering to me so I’ll know.

No longer can & will I take your games,
I know now it isn’t me to blame,
It was never my fault it was always yours,
I have proven to be one of your uncontrollable whores.








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Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:31:33 AM AEST
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Great write pixie,
I enjoyed reading this poem.
*~givingin~*


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:33:14 AM AEST
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*hugs you*
I always love your darker poems. This is no exception.
Great write hun.

*hugs*
Phil xxx


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:54:53 AM AEST
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osm...espeacially the last line...

awaiting your next...
~*ME*~


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:58:13 AM AEST
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WOAH! YOU GO GIRL!
Stitch


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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I have proven to be one of your uncontrollable whores

pixie this last line quite frankly i'm shocked! what will the vicar say! shame on you girl!...

Apart from that this is a bloody good write!

Johnny.



Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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pixie
Rebellious and emancipated!
Love it!


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:27:30 PM AEST
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PERFECT!!!!! Rebellion, defiance, anger... I love it!!! Excellent piece, talented pixie! I do hope you are doing better. Much love and hugs!!! Take care of yourself! Great write, as always. Forever,

FleurdeSang P.S.- YOU GO GIRL!


Re: Master, I Apologise (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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THIS IS AMAZING!!!!! i absolutely loved this!!!!...excellent job.....great work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears




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