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Did you not care?
I was so young
and still needed you there

How could you just leave like that?
Without saying I love you or goodbye
Do you have any idea how you made me feel?
I felt like you wanted me to die

How could you just turn your back?
So cold and blue
you must not have even cared dad.
I didn't know what to do

You were suppose to be here to help raise me
Keep me safe from danger
and teach me how to do things
But now your a complete stranger

Growing up watching other kids with there dads,
flying a kite
and learning how to ride there bikes
It hurt to see that sight

Now I hope you know,
how much you've hurt me
so if you decide to come back, remember,
I grew up without you, and now i dont need you so let it be! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 32 [informant] => karmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

dads pain

Contributed by karmen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:19:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why did you leave me?
Did you not care?
I was so young
and still needed you there

How could you just leave like that?
Without saying I love you or goodbye
Do you have any idea how you made me feel?
I felt like you wanted me to die

How could you just turn your back?
So cold and blue
you must not have even cared dad.
I didn't know what to do

You were suppose to be here to help raise me
Keep me safe from danger
and teach me how to do things
But now your a complete stranger

Growing up watching other kids with there dads,
flying a kite
and learning how to ride there bikes
It hurt to see that sight

Now I hope you know,
how much you've hurt me
so if you decide to come back, remember,
I grew up without you, and now i dont need you so let it be!

Copyright © karmen ... [ 2004-11-29 02:19:49]
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Re: dads pain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:31:22 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
So sorry u have to go thru this.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: dads pain (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:49:09 AM AEST
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i feel sorry for ur condition. your father may be an unlucky person for not remaining with such a child. but god is there for all. read my poems of that kind.
girish

Re: dads pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:42:07 AM AEST
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Written well, with emotion fueling your words, and memories painted in ink, awesome poem.

Re: dads pain (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:55:27 AM AEST
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very sad.
i can understood fully why you would feel this way though. you have every right to.
this was well written.

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