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Reach out and try to catch me
I'll slip through your fingers again
Falling forever

As I fall faster
Thoughts run through my head
Run through my whole past
Until I am dead

Screaming your name

As this hole gets steeper
The darkness goes deeper
A million hands couldn't catch me
Just like I couldn't keep her

As the wind blows hard
My eyes squint harder
My heart won't last
While the days get longer

The light's getting smaller
As the air's feeling colder
My hope's getting further
As we're all getting older

So I wait to see
When the bottom will come
Or will I fall forever
Away from the sun

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Falling

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:05:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

As I fade away from here tonight
Reach out and try to catch me
I'll slip through your fingers again
Falling forever

As I fall faster
Thoughts run through my head
Run through my whole past
Until I am dead

Screaming your name

As this hole gets steeper
The darkness goes deeper
A million hands couldn't catch me
Just like I couldn't keep her

As the wind blows hard
My eyes squint harder
My heart won't last
While the days get longer

The light's getting smaller
As the air's feeling colder
My hope's getting further
As we're all getting older

So I wait to see
When the bottom will come
Or will I fall forever
Away from the sun

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2004-11-29 01:05:49]
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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:21:00 AM AEST
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wow, i love this, well done

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:04:50 AM AEST
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well done. but why such sad thoughts?
as we grow older wisdom gets broader
girish

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