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Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self

You need me
You can always trust me
I will never leave your side

I can bring you
All the things you want
When you are looking for an end

I was once
A mirror looking at you crying
When you thought you had no friends

I loved you
But you hated everything
That I thought was beautiful in you

You punched me
I broke into a million pieces
I cut you and you liked the way I felt

It’s something to
Replace all your hurt when
Wanting to feel the comforting pain

You took me in hand
And put me to your skin
And stated to cut your self again

And ever since
Nor you and I have been the same
Both broken and incomplete filled with shame

I am broken
Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self

And you are now
Just another beautiful cutter
Who had enough and used me

To find an end
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I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I am broken
Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self

You need me
You can always trust me
I will never leave your side

I can bring you
All the things you want
When you are looking for an end

I was once
A mirror looking at you crying
When you thought you had no friends

I loved you
But you hated everything
That I thought was beautiful in you

You punched me
I broke into a million pieces
I cut you and you liked the way I felt

It’s something to
Replace all your hurt when
Wanting to feel the comforting pain

You took me in hand
And put me to your skin
And stated to cut your self again

And ever since
Nor you and I have been the same
Both broken and incomplete filled with shame

I am broken
Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self

And you are now
Just another beautiful cutter
Who had enough and used me

To find an end

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-28 23:27:57]
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:02:41 AM AEST
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And ever since
Nor you and I have been the same
Both broken and incomplete filled with shame

This is missing something..? maybe neither..I"m not sure.. but it's a wonderful poem.

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:43:44 AM AEST
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This is very good,
At first i werent sure where this one was going,
But then it all started to make more sense to me.
Im still not sure if its a good thing that i can relate to this but hey thats life.
Good write though......

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:33:40 AM AEST
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groovi

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by ImHearingVoices on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:55:15 AM AEST
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This is ace very good poem got into it and I want more..Lovely write x

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:06:23 PM AEST
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that was so sad yet beautiful

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:15:46 PM AEST
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ImHearingVoices is my best friend.. shes commented.

This was painful and enchanting x x

Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End) (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:35:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write,

And you are now
Just another beautiful cutter
Who had enough and used me
To find an end

what a way to end a poem that shows so much.

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