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It echoes in my mind
a summoning of spirts.
a voice that won't subside
Death
I see it in the shadows
A faceless person
I do no longer fear
Death
A tempting sensation
To leave the world behind
Make me beg and defy my mind
Death
An emtion that will not go away
I crying face
Saved for a rainy day
Death
A childs soul gone wicked
NO longer do they smile
While there parents hold on to there dear child
Death
It knows no mercy
DOes not care who you are
Death
That secret hidden deep in yourself
FInd it's face among your shelve
Death
Brings back memories of the past
Rape, love, deseption, All things ment to last
Death
Pushing you to your extreme
A cut of blood, watch it stream
Death
Follow it to that place
Look at it's hollow face
Death
follow it as it says your name
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DEATH.......

Contributed by alyssakoren_03 on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:30:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death
It echoes in my mind
a summoning of spirts.
a voice that won't subside
Death
I see it in the shadows
A faceless person
I do no longer fear
Death
A tempting sensation
To leave the world behind
Make me beg and defy my mind
Death
An emtion that will not go away
I crying face
Saved for a rainy day
Death
A childs soul gone wicked
NO longer do they smile
While there parents hold on to there dear child
Death
It knows no mercy
DOes not care who you are
Death
That secret hidden deep in yourself
FInd it's face among your shelve
Death
Brings back memories of the past
Rape, love, deseption, All things ment to last
Death
Pushing you to your extreme
A cut of blood, watch it stream
Death
Follow it to that place
Look at it's hollow face
Death
follow it as it says your name
dare to play it's selfish games

Copyright © alyssakoren_03 ... [ 2004-11-28 20:30:27]
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Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by skraggs on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:35:56 PM AEST
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good write, dont die

Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:37:28 PM AEST
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ive been there myself, but today i am far too curious of whats around the corner, this is a beautiful heartfelt poem, and yes, i do care, im here if you want to talk to someone, oldengmastiff@hotmail.com hugs n' love nessa

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Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:00:19 PM AEST
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ive been there before, but for some reason my views changed. i dont know why either. you have the rest of your life to die, why do it now? whats always tempting isnt the best thing for us. dont let go and dont give up. death touches more than one person. maybe i should type up my latest poem and send it to you....::considers:: i hope your views change as mine have. views are more easily changable than life is in most cases.

Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:33:59 PM AEST
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i know this feeling very well.....and believe there are so many people who care about u whether u realize it or not.....and you have such a talent.......this is an awesome poem....u did an excellent job....i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
P.S. if u need to talk to someone i'm here

Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:09:09 PM AEST
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Great write. I know the feeling well, and want you to know that I care. Death is permanent where problems and pain are temporary. Hang in there, the pain will soon fade and the problems will be solved.

Re: DEATH....... (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:45:00 PM AEST
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very good poem. everything flows. the rhythm is good too. but know that there are people in the world who do care. dont give up. keep writing these great poems.

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