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Array ( [sid] => 73481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Hope [time] => 2004-11-28 17:59:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've got nothing to say, only feelings I cant put on paper, I cant paint a picture or make a movie...
I'm feeling like ive lost hope that there is hope out there.
Only so many days of freedom out there.
I can tell you my mind is a stormy dark place, fill of the past, these images to burnt in to remove...
I'm a scratched record, no use to anyone, but you keep me to taunt me, replace me, throw me out to the trash, I don't want to be here no more.
I'm no used and I'm a mess.
Everything rushes at once, and I get it all wrong... say yes when I mean no, say I love you when I wanted to wait for a better time... say I need you when I do, but you don't need to hear it from me.
Another day of this madness... this overwhelming feeling of not belonging here... I swear I don't think like you do.
I'm not normal, and it's not a good thing.
I just cant be the person that you all want me to be... a person, I cant do it, I don't have it in me to be like you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 61 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
No Hope

Contributed by surge_joebot on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:59:11 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I've got nothing to say, only feelings I cant put on paper, I cant paint a picture or make a movie...
I'm feeling like ive lost hope that there is hope out there.
Only so many days of freedom out there.
I can tell you my mind is a stormy dark place, fill of the past, these images to burnt in to remove...
I'm a scratched record, no use to anyone, but you keep me to taunt me, replace me, throw me out to the trash, I don't want to be here no more.
I'm no used and I'm a mess.
Everything rushes at once, and I get it all wrong... say yes when I mean no, say I love you when I wanted to wait for a better time... say I need you when I do, but you don't need to hear it from me.
Another day of this madness... this overwhelming feeling of not belonging here... I swear I don't think like you do.
I'm not normal, and it's not a good thing.
I just cant be the person that you all want me to be... a person, I cant do it, I don't have it in me to be like you.




Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-28 17:59:11]
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Re: No Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:02:30 PM AEST
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wow...that is like how I feel....it is hard to express that and I understand fully.


Re: No Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:19:32 PM AEST
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sometimes I feel just like that. Once again, wonderful imagery.


Re: No Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:12:49 PM AEST
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I'm sure this is the way millions of people feel. You expressed well.


Re: No Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:21:12 PM AEST
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wow, this is beautiful, well done


Re: No Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:45:56 PM AEST
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fantastic write. reminds me of three days grace, just like you.




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