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Array ( [sid] => 73464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sad Song [time] => 2004-11-28 14:49:21 [hometext] => This poem sucks really bad. This could be sad, bad day, goodbye, or lots of other topics. I picked sad because I am. [bodytext] => Everything was going great

Then something slipped

Is this a mistake, or is it fate?

It feels like everything just ripped

My happy face doesn't stay out long

Nothing seems to go my way

More often I'm singing my own sad song

This started as a wonderful day

Now I can't help but just break down

Last night I was happy as can be

But now my face shows a frown

I'm not ok, can't you see?

I try so hard to not be sad

But now I'm drowning in the tears

He was the the best thing I ever had

We should have been for years

This is all I can think about

I don't think we can ever be fine

All I want to do is doubt

God, please give me a sign

When you said that we are done

My world began to crash and burn

When we were together, we had so much fun

I still have so much to learn

You say that I mean so much to you

This hurts so bad

How can you do the things you do?

Just thinking about you makes me sad

I hope you never do anything like this again

Because I'm lost

You put me through too much pain

And I'll never come back to you

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My Sad Song

Contributed by LilGnefkow on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Everything was going great

Then something slipped

Is this a mistake, or is it fate?

It feels like everything just ripped

My happy face doesn't stay out long

Nothing seems to go my way

More often I'm singing my own sad song

This started as a wonderful day

Now I can't help but just break down

Last night I was happy as can be

But now my face shows a frown

I'm not ok, can't you see?

I try so hard to not be sad

But now I'm drowning in the tears

He was the the best thing I ever had

We should have been for years

This is all I can think about

I don't think we can ever be fine

All I want to do is doubt

God, please give me a sign

When you said that we are done

My world began to crash and burn

When we were together, we had so much fun

I still have so much to learn

You say that I mean so much to you

This hurts so bad

How can you do the things you do?

Just thinking about you makes me sad

I hope you never do anything like this again

Because I'm lost

You put me through too much pain

And I'll never come back to you





Copyright © LilGnefkow ... [ 2004-11-28 14:49:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:15:01 PM AEST
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good write...you'll find out if this relationship was really meant to be soon enough. everything happens for a reason/




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