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Array ( [sid] => 73392 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What If I'm Like That Too [time] => 2004-11-27 22:52:58 [hometext] => about an argument i had with my cousin the other day [bodytext] => i HATE when she does that
always criticizing my music
and where i always listen to that crap she calls music
and swallow my tounge
she always nags, and hates it because i like it
she even has the balls to tell me
to my face, my music sucks, but hers is better
while all she listens to is that talentless sister of an airhead
who can't even play an instrument
and spews garbage about my music
Guitars and violins, all mixed into one
a beautiful sound really
but she has the nerve to change the music
when i know if i were to do the same
she'd have a fit
but is amazed when i do
that i could be that hypocritical
when i've never even said a word
about her ____
and then goes on about how she needs a guitar more than me
when she has two already
and i'm still on the zero end of things
and monday, when my friend, her boyfriend brings it up
she's gonna go off, because its not her music
with her it's 'Dear God, no punk, who would want to listen to that crap anyway'
when her Cds are the Ataris and Green Day.....
God I hate her for that
but then again
what if i'm like that
and i don't even realize it....
what if i'm as bad as she is
even though, i take care to make sure
i always put the other person before me
because when I don't, i'm a _____
but when she dosen't give a ____
nobody cares
i HATE this........ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 31 [informant] => kailadragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

What If I'm Like That Too

Contributed by kailadragon on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

i HATE when she does that
always criticizing my music
and where i always listen to that crap she calls music
and swallow my tounge
she always nags, and hates it because i like it
she even has the balls to tell me
to my face, my music sucks, but hers is better
while all she listens to is that talentless sister of an airhead
who can't even play an instrument
and spews garbage about my music
Guitars and violins, all mixed into one
a beautiful sound really
but she has the nerve to change the music
when i know if i were to do the same
she'd have a fit
but is amazed when i do
that i could be that hypocritical
when i've never even said a word
about her ____
and then goes on about how she needs a guitar more than me
when she has two already
and i'm still on the zero end of things
and monday, when my friend, her boyfriend brings it up
she's gonna go off, because its not her music
with her it's 'Dear God, no punk, who would want to listen to that crap anyway'
when her Cds are the Ataris and Green Day.....
God I hate her for that
but then again
what if i'm like that
and i don't even realize it....
what if i'm as bad as she is
even though, i take care to make sure
i always put the other person before me
because when I don't, i'm a _____
but when she dosen't give a ____
nobody cares
i HATE this........

Copyright © kailadragon ... [ 2004-11-27 22:52:58]
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Re: What If I'm Like That Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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I have been here before, many times. I know how it goes, somone listining to smooth jazz once insulted my music, I just laughed, industrial and punk far exceed smooth jazz.

Re: What If I'm Like That Too (User Rating: 1 )
by skachickcallie on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:05:14 PM AEST
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it will be ok.....too bad that "girl" reads your poems........

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