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No one believed me when I said ,
Soon I will be dead.
When I finally told you how I felt inside,
You ignored the words that I said.
It hurt me deep when I realized I was right.
That no one cares about me,
They say they do but HA thats a laugh.
Look at him ignoring my words.
The words I found so hard to say.
And when I finally said them
He didn't want to stay.
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Him

Contributed by Jen54 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:43:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

No one believed a single word I said.
No one believed me when I said ,
Soon I will be dead.
When I finally told you how I felt inside,
You ignored the words that I said.
It hurt me deep when I realized I was right.
That no one cares about me,
They say they do but HA thats a laugh.
Look at him ignoring my words.
The words I found so hard to say.
And when I finally said them
He didn't want to stay.

Copyright © Jen54 ... [ 2004-11-27 11:43:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:05:41 PM AEST
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awww Jen, a very pained and sad write,

pixie xx

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by lunartune on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:45:13 PM AEST
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Wow, that's really a sad write. i hope you feel better, but great poem.
-LYNN

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 07:22:21 PM AEST
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Loved it. Full of real pain and emotion, you have described what so many people feel, right down to a tee. Keep up the top work, Jen

Dan

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by xxDeathxTOxKristixx on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:20:14 PM AEST
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wow! that was a good write! i know exactly how you felt when u were writing that one! i was recently in love with a boy....but when i told him how much i cared he left :'(....

i loved your poem!

Kristi a.k.a. kristina

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:53:34 PM AEST
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I really like this one!
It's sad, but it's so moving.

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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Again, Dan took thw words right outa my mouth :) I think most of us have been right where you were when you wrote this. Take care.

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:56:27 PM AEST
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wow very powerful write jen

Tiff

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