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Array ( [sid] => 73301 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The window [time] => 2004-11-27 08:48:30 [hometext] => empty?lonely? lemme know what u think of this poem! [bodytext] => I sit by the window
watching the people go by
I sit by the window
wondering why

I sit by the window
thinking about my life
I sit by the window
with a sharp knife

I sit by the window
as i cut through my skin
I sit by the window
as i let my emptyness win

I sit by the window
as my life starts to fade
I sit by the window
as my soul begins to stray

I sit by the window
alive no more
I sit by the window
with my wrist tore

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The window

Contributed by pyro_maniac on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 08:48:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I sit by the window
watching the people go by
I sit by the window
wondering why

I sit by the window
thinking about my life
I sit by the window
with a sharp knife

I sit by the window
as i cut through my skin
I sit by the window
as i let my emptyness win

I sit by the window
as my life starts to fade
I sit by the window
as my soul begins to stray

I sit by the window
alive no more
I sit by the window
with my wrist tore

Copyright © pyro_maniac ... [ 2004-11-27 08:48:30]
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Re: The window (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:02:40 AM AEST
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a genteler write about suicide, very deep and so emotional, I am sorry that you feel like this *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: The window (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:34:12 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, I'm sorry that you feel this way. One day things will get better.
Katie

Re: The window (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:31:12 AM AEST
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Good write, a lot of emotion put into this. Sometimes changing your perspective, like looking in through the window, can bring new understanding to everything. Keep writing.

Re: The window (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:01:29 PM AEST
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Very good write. Your words spoken for so many who are empty and lonely. Sitting by the window watching life go by. I have felt this plenty of times. But things do get better. "GOOD WRITE"

~~DENNIS~~

Re: The window (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 07:22:17 PM AEST
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very good write!
the funny thing is, i just finished writing something that just came to my mind, that had to do with somebody sitting by a window clenching a knife, except with a different perspective i guess...
but I must say, though this poem is short, it is really well written and very well detailed!
Great write, keep up the goor work!

*~Alicia~*

p.s see you at school tomorrow ^.~

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