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has taken over me
The darkness of the valley
wont let me free

The darkness of the valley
took my soul
The darkness of the valley
will take my life as its toll

The darkness of the valley
left me all alone
The darkness of the valley
makes me cold to the bone

The darkness of the valley
Is takeing over my life
The darkness of the valley
has left me in grieff

The darkness of the valley
has killed my anxious soul
The darkness of the valley
has left me in a dark hole [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyro_maniac [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The darkness of the valley

Contributed by pyro_maniac on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 08:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The darkness of the valley
has taken over me
The darkness of the valley
wont let me free

The darkness of the valley
took my soul
The darkness of the valley
will take my life as its toll

The darkness of the valley
left me all alone
The darkness of the valley
makes me cold to the bone

The darkness of the valley
Is takeing over my life
The darkness of the valley
has left me in grieff

The darkness of the valley
has killed my anxious soul
The darkness of the valley
has left me in a dark hole

Copyright © pyro_maniac ... [ 2004-11-27 08:39:04]
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Re: The darkness of the valley (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:43:43 AM AEST
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I like it, especially the last stanza. Great write.
Katie

Re: The darkness of the valley (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:06:15 PM AEST
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The darkness I hate the darkness but it is apart of everyday life for us that feel it's pull.
Good write.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: The darkness of the valley (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 07:36:46 PM AEST
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well written, darkness is a part of my life to and I can very much relate to this poem..well great job keep it up...oh and I liked the repetetiveness of the darkness of the valley

Re: The darkness of the valley (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:01:39 PM AEST
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A well written poem. Very sad.

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