The way you looked tonight, the light burning your skin, I heard your voice...

It seemed so distant, yet right in my head. The only sound, your breathing on my chest, made me feel whole.

1000 steps wouldn’t keep me from you, 1000 fires couldn’t match my flame. I will hold you until forever’s last day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 2 [informant] => andthefoolshallburn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Forever's Last Day Contributed by andthefoolshallburn on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:32:46 PM in AEST Topic: LovePoetry The way you looked tonight, the light burning your skin, I heard your voice... It seemed so distant, yet right in my head. The only sound, your breathing on my chest, made me feel whole. 1000 steps wouldn’t keep me from you, 1000 fires couldn’t match my flame. I will hold you until forever’s last day Copyright © andthefoolshallburn ... [ 2004-11-26 18:32:46] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem

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Re: Forever's Last Day (User Rating: 1 ) by Kayden on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:55:19 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) goog comparisons

Re: Forever's Last Day (User Rating: 1 ) by travisk on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:35:33 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) hell, i'd even say good comparisons! but i guess goog will suffice.