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Array ( [sid] => 73241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Lord and my emotion [time] => 2004-11-26 16:20:49 [hometext] => Out pour of emotion....it may not all fit together too well...but it needed out of my heart and sole....comments would be very much appreciated. [bodytext] =>



My thirst to cry just can’t be quenched,
Every time you walk away my heart is wrenched.
I want to tell you what you do to me, but no what’s the point.
Its not like you actually share your viewpoint.
My heart is left to hang in the balance of life,
The rope holding the balance always under threat from your knife.
Would you notice if I stopped turning up to college?
Come on its not like I’m asking for marriage.
All I wanted was a little more commitment,
Alas, obviously too much in your judgement.

How would you react to be the one to find me hanging from a rope?
Would you be able to cope?
You know I’m a little messed up inside my head,
And that many times I have wished to be dead.
After all you did bring up the scars I carry on my arms.
Interesting that I am a Christian that self-harms.
Lord I pray to you every day, you know I am weak.
Lord, why do you still bother to carry me when I am always so bleak?
I know I am one of your precious children,
Yet is thy deserving of your love as a bad Christian?

I have much to ask forgiveness for,
Lord, please help me to heal a heart so sore.
I know this is part of your plan for me,
Alas, I find the purpose hard to see.
All I pray for is a little guidance to understand why,
Instead of sitting here night after night just wishing to cry.
Lord, over these last few months I have repented for my sins,
I guess this is where my new life begins…



SJ






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Our Lord and my emotion

Contributed by little_genna on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:20:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry







My thirst to cry just can’t be quenched,
Every time you walk away my heart is wrenched.
I want to tell you what you do to me, but no what’s the point.
Its not like you actually share your viewpoint.
My heart is left to hang in the balance of life,
The rope holding the balance always under threat from your knife.
Would you notice if I stopped turning up to college?
Come on its not like I’m asking for marriage.
All I wanted was a little more commitment,
Alas, obviously too much in your judgement.

How would you react to be the one to find me hanging from a rope?
Would you be able to cope?
You know I’m a little messed up inside my head,
And that many times I have wished to be dead.
After all you did bring up the scars I carry on my arms.
Interesting that I am a Christian that self-harms.
Lord I pray to you every day, you know I am weak.
Lord, why do you still bother to carry me when I am always so bleak?
I know I am one of your precious children,
Yet is thy deserving of your love as a bad Christian?

I have much to ask forgiveness for,
Lord, please help me to heal a heart so sore.
I know this is part of your plan for me,
Alas, I find the purpose hard to see.
All I pray for is a little guidance to understand why,
Instead of sitting here night after night just wishing to cry.
Lord, over these last few months I have repented for my sins,
I guess this is where my new life begins…



SJ










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Re: Our Lord and my emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:42:41 PM AEST
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U owe no man an explanation for your life.
People like that are the ones that 'cause others to give up fighting and trusting God. God isn't religion, God is luv, compassion, faith, hope, joy, peace.
God gave u forgiveness at the cross now u jus need to find forgiviness for yourself.
Don't let anyone sit in God's judgement seat and make u feel bad about your past or if u fall.
Judgemental people jus point fingers to get the focus off their own inner hells.
luv, hugs, faith, hope, peace,
emy


Re: Our Lord and my emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:58:15 PM AEST
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you know me and how i feel about this
and know i am also here for you stace
i was on earlier but was away
i was hungry what can i say
i will be on and close for the rest of today




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