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I've tried to explain it
But you just don't understand
You've tried so hard to help me
But I don't want your help anymore
You once believed in me
And I know now you don't anymore
I gave it all I could
I guess I'm just not strong enough
So I have given up
I have lost all hope in myself
And I know that you have too. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Jen54 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

You

Contributed by Jen54 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:58:50 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You just don't get it do you?
I've tried to explain it
But you just don't understand
You've tried so hard to help me
But I don't want your help anymore
You once believed in me
And I know now you don't anymore
I gave it all I could
I guess I'm just not strong enough
So I have given up
I have lost all hope in myself
And I know that you have too.

Copyright © Jen54 ... [ 2004-11-26 11:58:50]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:03:13 PM AEST
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short but very sad *hugs for you* I hope that one day you regain your hope in yourself,

pixie xx

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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been there and i hate it! don't loose all hope...let there be some...you will find someone or something that will eventually bring u somewhat back up again...good luck

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelluv2write on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:19:32 PM AEST
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How sad, Never loose hope. Always remember you were put here for a reason. And someone does love you and believes in you.
Peace and Love,
Angel

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:25:27 PM AEST
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Hmmm...hope seems to be such a fleeting thing in this world today. I agree with you on how painful it is when someone loses hope in you. Don't let your life depend on them. You're guessing you're just not strong enough, but somewhere deep down you know that you are. Push onward.
~Carrie~

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:54:49 PM AEST
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I've felt like this before...
Good write.

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